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Title: Reconciliations 19 May 2011 10:22 pm
Reviewer: Kristi (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Oh, please update as soon as possible!
Title: Reconciliations 19 May 2011 9:25 pm
Reviewer: B00kw0rm92 (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh, another wonderful chapter! I love the little twists with this and how Severus is slowly changing his opinion of Harry. And Toby's still adorable! Can't wait for more!
Title: December Snow - part 2 19 May 2011 1:00 am
Reviewer: Frozenfire101 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I am just so glad that Irma... well Eileen really, finally found out about Toby. I really feel sorry for her and I think you portrayed her in a rather original way, well done. I am also joyous that Toby and Harry now know that Snape is Toby's father and all the smaller details that go along with that. I cannot wait until we see the kitten again, Toby really has a connection to it. One thing I really like about Toby is that he is so much like Snape, except a nice, more.. much more caring version. Although if Snape was the one that found the kitten out there in the cold, I believe that he would have helped it himself. I don't have time to read anymore due to school and so-called important things like that.
    BYE!!! from your darling :D lil sis!
Title: The Agreement 18 May 2011 7:46 am
Reviewer: EmeraldGreen (Signed) [Report This]
    O.o Oh my. I really liked this chapter. The unbreakable vow was interesting, not the usual take that's for sure. I liked it. And the dispute in the library was intriguing, not to mention Hermione getting answers from a very unlikely source. I truly wonder where this is leading, as it goes, mysteries are popping up faster then they can be solved. This is a fantastic piece of work.

    I found it a bit surprising how Harry messed up in the message he sent as S.J.E after being so careful. He calls himself a brother...then claims to have thought himself an orphan. I'm very interested to see how Snape will react to that.

    We haven't seen much of Toby lately. I was a bit confused though, since in the last chapter Harry apparently spent so little time with him, and now it seems that he is spending more time with him then usual. Is he trying to make it up to him perhaps?

    It seems that Remus didn't do much to allay Harry's fears. He's still suspicious I suppose. I wonder why he left it alone, only to end up writing Snape about a paternity potion.

    Then there's the issue with Hermionie and Ron. They seem to be growing apart. I wonder how that will Play out. In any case great story and great chapter I LOVE it, and I hope you update soon. ^_^.

    Author's Response:

    Thank you so much for your review, it is ones like yours in which provide me with the greatest of motivations, in addition to the others. Toby comes and goes as Harry's priorities change frequently, which is why sometimes he barely sees the boy at all and yet he does try, so whenever he gets the chance, Harry does spent time with the boy. He tries, but Harry is only a sixteen year old and while he thinks the world of Toby, he's noreally prepared for such an additional responsibility. Harry decided Remus was right, and yet since he doesn't know exactly what Sirius said, he's being paranoid and can't push his curiosity. Also, it's not for a parent, he's actually trying to figure out if he has any other family besides the Dursleys. And yes, he is becoming rather distant from his usual pair of friends, but I won't say much on that right now.

    Thanks again, and I will be updating the next chapter in a moment.

Title: The Agreement 18 May 2011 2:17 am
Reviewer: MerlinHalliwell (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Hi,

    I really enjoy your story, it's unique and very interesting. I always look forward to you writing a new chapter.

    Keep updating!!
Title: The Agreement 18 May 2011 12:25 am
Reviewer: astutia (Signed) [Report This]
    Awesome fic! update soon :D:D
Title: The Agreement 17 May 2011 5:40 pm
Reviewer: karee (Signed) [Report This]
    the story keeps getting better, i love it.
Title: The Agreement 17 May 2011 12:15 pm
Reviewer: heartstar (Anonymous) [Report This]
    OH Very Very Nice I love how harry is going to gert sev to help him find out am answer sev doesn't want to know ha! I can't wait!!!!!!!!
Title: An Ultimate Change 17 May 2011 11:14 am
Reviewer: Frozenfire101 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    love iT! Love It! Love It!
    This chapter was so good, I just loved every minutes of it! When Harry collided in to Snape I could have burst out laughing! Let me tell yuoi that in my head I will be laughing for at least another hour. I cannot wait until Snape actually tells Harry a bit about his mother!!!!
    I absoluely LOVE that this is a very Snape-Harry father-son chapter, especially with the potion making bit. I am curious however on what Harry is going to do with such a potions. oh well hoping to find out soon!
    BYE!!!
Title: The Spreading of Suspicion 17 May 2011 10:49 am
Reviewer: Frozenfire101 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Lovely chappie!!
    I do not really have a favourite quote from this chapter and I think I may know what they were talking about ;)
    Too bad for Harry that Remus has a great sense of smell because of his wolf instincts!
    Now that I think about it, I beleive that my favourite quote is as follows: 'Oh it's nothing really, just that you look like Professor Snape when he's thinking about something really silly.' She smiled.
    LOL totally! Leave it too Luna to have the strangest line yet! I really do have to wonder how you come up with these things!!
    Other things I liked were when Draco and Harry spoke, the bloody baron bit and many others, Well Done!
    Anyway can't wait too read the next chapter!
    BYE!!!

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