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Reviews For The Son Becomes the Father
BYE!!! from your darling :D lil sis!
I found it a bit surprising how Harry messed up in the message he sent as S.J.E after being so careful. He calls himself a brother...then claims to have thought himself an orphan. I'm very interested to see how Snape will react to that. We haven't seen much of Toby lately. I was a bit confused though, since in the last chapter Harry apparently spent so little time with him, and now it seems that he is spending more time with him then usual. Is he trying to make it up to him perhaps? It seems that Remus didn't do much to allay Harry's fears. He's still suspicious I suppose. I wonder why he left it alone, only to end up writing Snape about a paternity potion. Then there's the issue with Hermionie and Ron. They seem to be growing apart. I wonder how that will Play out. In any case great story and great chapter I LOVE it, and I hope you update soon. ^_^. Author's Response: Thank you so much for your review, it is ones like yours in which provide me with the greatest of motivations, in addition to the others. Toby comes and goes as Harry's priorities change frequently, which is why sometimes he barely sees the boy at all and yet he does try, so whenever he gets the chance, Harry does spent time with the boy. He tries, but Harry is only a sixteen year old and while he thinks the world of Toby, he's noreally prepared for such an additional responsibility. Harry decided Remus was right, and yet since he doesn't know exactly what Sirius said, he's being paranoid and can't push his curiosity. Also, it's not for a parent, he's actually trying to figure out if he has any other family besides the Dursleys. And yes, he is becoming rather distant from his usual pair of friends, but I won't say much on that right now. Thanks again, and I will be updating the next chapter in a moment.
I really enjoy your story, it's unique and very interesting. I always look forward to you writing a new chapter. Keep updating!!
This chapter was so good, I just loved every minutes of it! When Harry collided in to Snape I could have burst out laughing! Let me tell yuoi that in my head I will be laughing for at least another hour. I cannot wait until Snape actually tells Harry a bit about his mother!!!! I absoluely LOVE that this is a very Snape-Harry father-son chapter, especially with the potion making bit. I am curious however on what Harry is going to do with such a potions. oh well hoping to find out soon! BYE!!!
I do not really have a favourite quote from this chapter and I think I may know what they were talking about ;) Too bad for Harry that Remus has a great sense of smell because of his wolf instincts! Now that I think about it, I beleive that my favourite quote is as follows: 'Oh it's nothing really, just that you look like Professor Snape when he's thinking about something really silly.' She smiled. LOL totally! Leave it too Luna to have the strangest line yet! I really do have to wonder how you come up with these things!! Other things I liked were when Draco and Harry spoke, the bloody baron bit and many others, Well Done! Anyway can't wait too read the next chapter! BYE!!! |
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