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Reviews For The Son Becomes the Father
This chapter was quieter than the others but was awesome none the less. BYE!!!
I am curious how Snape's is going to react to the decreased formal language, just one step closer to him finding out who it really is. I love the questions he asks an the answers that Harry replies with, a lot of Snape's are very entertaining and enjoyable, keep up the good work. The family moments that managed to make their way into almost every chapter is just fabulous! I absolutely love family moments, whether it be all three, Snape and Harry or even Toby and harry! They are just so well done and I just cannot seem to et enough of them! It was so cute that Toby and Harry are 'sharing mums'. I find it rather funny how they have it the other way round and how their father's are the same ye there mothers are not. I think it was very sweet of Harry to let him do that and I also think that Toby very much appreciated it. And speaking of sweet Toby moments, this was my fave quote for this chappie: 'Does that mean I can skip breakfast?'. FuNnY!! Loved it. Off to read (and review) the next chapter so lots of hugs and kisses for the wonderful things you've been writing. BYE!!!
Author's Response: He cares a great deal for his mother, however Sev is also a bitter man w cannot - at this moment - find it in himself to let go to the past in the way that he is unable to forgive her yet. If she were in trouble, he would be there to help her, but or the general day-to-day things, Severus prefers they remain civil only.
Draco's an interesting character - he must be quite desperate to enter the Chamber. More Toby, please! No, no ideas where it's going on a larger scale. Will Toby, his mom, and Mildred connect to Voldemort's plans, somehow? Maybe some newspaper articles hinting what's going on in the "real world" will give us some clues. Update soon, plz! Author's Response: Oh yes, Draco is determined to get that information! I am trying to add as much Toby as possible, however with the events upcoming and the fact that the 6th year is nearing a close, I sometimes have to place the boy in lesser priority, just as Harry is doing from time to time, although he does try to fix it when he can. No, Mildred and Wenda do not connect to Voldy's plans, however I can't say much about Toby because with a boy so linked to Snape and Harry, he's likely to get caught up in the war as well, one way or another. The newspaper idea is interesting, though not sure if I'll use it. Will be updating soon, thanks for the review!
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