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Title: The Agreement 16 May 2011 1:01 am
Reviewer: JAWorley (Signed) [Report This]
    I just wanted to point out that I'm pretty sure the NEWTs are taken at the end of their seventh year, not their sixth year.

    Great chapter!
Title: The Agreement 15 May 2011 7:35 pm
Reviewer: frenchy (Anonymous) [Report This]
    WOw ! so much suspense ! so well done !
    tank you for that very interesting chapter.

    frenchy
Title: The Agreement 15 May 2011 6:05 pm
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh no! Snape is suspicious. I just can't wait until the whole truth comes out. It will be exciting. LOL! Understatement of the year.
Title: The Agreement 15 May 2011 5:53 pm
Reviewer: 1reader_1writer (Signed) [Report This]
    That ending was quite a shocker. I enjoyed the entire chapter, of course. Good work :)
Title: The Agreement 15 May 2011 4:31 pm
Reviewer: Kristi (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Oh, I can't wait to see what happens next! I wonder what Severus will say to Harry and Draco regarding the Unbreakable Vow. Does Mildred Merrengold have anything to do with Toby's mother Wenda Jones? I ask because of Severus' reaction and that she hasn't been able to acquire an heirloom from the Prince family. Also, will Severus require that S.J.E. meet him in person for help with the paternity problem? Also was this updated on May 14th? If so, why wasn't it on the first page for Recent updates?
Title: The Agreement 15 May 2011 3:23 pm
Reviewer: ariablu (Signed) [Report This]
    You manage to capture my interest e surprise me every time. I really enjoy reading your story, it's becoming one of my favorite Severitus fics. You're doing a great job.
    Cheers xoxo
Title: The Agreement 15 May 2011 1:07 pm
Reviewer: Zireael07 (Signed) [Report This]
    I love the message S.J.E wrote! I can't wait to see Snape's reply!
Title: Possibilities 14 May 2011 11:32 am
Reviewer: karee (Signed) [Report This]
    I loved this chapter , i like that Harry speak his mind and doesnt take sh*t from anyone. update soon pls.
Title: Possibilities 14 May 2011 7:52 am
Reviewer: Elfwyn (Anonymous) [Report This]
    A wonderful story that is well written and very gripping. Young Toby is a delight and although Irma as Severus' mother isn't new, the fact he doesn't get along with her is a unique twist.

    One thing I find lacking, especially Harry not objecting to any of it, is that two people swore and promised not to tell another soul about Toby and then turned around and told someone without asking Harry's permission. Hermione with Ginny, and Remus with Tonks. Where is the honor and trust in these people? How can Harry continue to trust secrets to them? At this point the needs magic vows or contracts perhaps. Tonks could have turned out poorly as she is an auror, though a poor one that seems to ignore the law, and has a duty to report this. How exactly did Remus talk to Albus without blabbing first? Albus didn't seem to be telling everyone in the Order.

    Is Albus telling Harry the prophecy doesn't concern him now because he is Snape's son? If so why does that disqualify him?

    Author's Response:

    Thanks, I'm thrilled to hear you think so. Yeah? I didn't know that.

    To clear a few things up, Harry had told Hermione to tell Ginny about Toby while he told Dean and Seamus at the same time. And he knew Remus would tell Tonks, as it was expected and she had already seen the boy, also because Harry didn't want to cause conflict between the pair as Reus would struggle with his silence there. Therefore he continues to vaguely trust them because they technically didn't betray his secrets. He's learning though, as he is moving on to vows and magical contracts for certain others, not wanting to risk it. That also depends on the person too. You have a point about Tonks being an auror, however because the Ministry is bein corrupted because of Voldemort and the darker times they're in, she is really working for the Order than anyone, in which Dumbledore has instructed her to keep Toby a secret once he knew she knew about it. Had it been peaceful times without the Dark Lord, yes...she would have to report it. As for Remus and Dumbledore; the headmaster knew Remus had been informed. Yes, he does seem to know everything, that Dumbledore. And no, he's not telling anyone in the Order that doesn't already know; Snape is in the Order. Plus, it would go against his plans.

    Albus lied to Harry when he said the prophecy no longer concerns him. Being Snape's son would not disqualify him, also it's one of the few things Dumbledore doesn't know...that Harry is Snape's son. The reasoning behind suddenly separating Harry from the confrontation with Voldemort has more to do with Toby then Harry. More on that later.

    Thanks for the review! Will be updating now.

Title: Possibilities 12 May 2011 8:44 pm
Reviewer: JAWorley (Signed) [Report This]
    It was interesting that he chose to talk to Remus. I still think it would be good to eventually have Severus find out about Toby, but then be mad at Harry for not telling him and tell Harry to just 'stay away from my son' (but at this point have Harry already know that Severus is his father?) It would create lots of nice angst for Harry, Toby, and Severus

    Author's Response: Harry needed someone who knew Lily and James really well and also who already knew about Toby. He's annoyed with Dumbledore and Hagrid wasn't the best choice; hence Remus. Can't say much about when Sev finds out the truth, though I have 90% of that bit planned and am nearing the more major events of the year. I agree with the angst comment though. Thanks for the review!

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