Well, one advice would be...get on to the plot!!! Can't see where or how this would go, though, this is a really unique plot, so I look forward to more!
| Title: Possibilities
| 12 May 2011 1:25 pm
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| Reviewer: Chetari (Anonymous)
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This story is great so far. I really enjoy reading it though I would like to see more of what happens. Basically meaning I'm anxiously waiting for the next update. So, the sooner the better.
AWESOME~!! Please update soon and please make the chapters a little longer. This one was far too short.
| Title: Possibilities
| 12 May 2011 1:01 am
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| Reviewer: Pellegrina (Anonymous)
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Oh, please don't stop with the story! I'm checking for new chapters daily, because I enjoy it so much! Toby is adorable and your Harry as well! I dearly hope that Severus'll come around soon, and though I partly agree with Harry's point of view concerning telling Snape about his son(s) before the war is over, I still think Snape would be a much bigger help at some point helping Harry openly in his fight. I don't quite get Albus' position in all of it, but as I'm not the greatest fan of him anyway, I like your take on him. If he really still thinks that not informing Harry about his destiny as he believes it to be, he can't be helped, I guess! "Just be a normal little boy and once I decide you to, you have to sacrifice yourself for the greater good. Pity, I didn't let you enjoy a bit of a childhood at least, but I only resently found out that you could've been treated like a normal child growing up anyway and all that neglect wasn't actually necessary to turn you into the perfect sacrifical lamb... Here, have a lemon drop and be a happy little boy until I have need of you again."
Well, what I intended to say is, that I hope you won't give up on this fic, because it's quite original and very well written! Thanks for sharing!
Author's Response: I was never actually stop writing it, merely that I lacked the motivation to do so, which would mean I'd do a little then move on, rather than write a chapter, update, write, plan, etc. Thanks for all of your comments though, I'm glad to read them. Heh, I never said that Snape wouldn't help harry in the war unless he knew about his sons...still writing that though, so not sure yet. Can't say much about Dumbledore, but know that there is more to his plan of "disincluding" Harry than it seems. Haha, your Dumbledore impression was funny, and accurate, of course. I won't give up on it so long as I have reviewers/readers who remind me that they're sticking by it as well. You're welcome. Thanks for your review! Will be updating shortly.
| Title: Possibilities
| 12 May 2011 12:23 am
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| Reviewer: frenchy (Anonymous)
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I want you to know that your fic is my precious little time for relaxing after exams, it's so good !
thank you for that, really.
frenchy
CHAPTER 25? your story is GREAT... wonderful... brilliant... awesome... fabulous... terrific... superb... amazing... stupendous... phenomenal... COOL. and I personally cant wait to see that chapter 25... (I honestly cant think of any more adjectives to "perfect" but I think youll get my point anyway and feel more motivated :))
| Title: Possibilities
| 12 May 2011 12:04 am
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Liked having Remus in the story and his cryptic letter to Severus. Toby is so lovely and deserves so much more than he has up to now. can we have more Harry Severus interaction soon?
Ooooooh, amazing, amazing chapter!!! I really do adore this! Harry's still so cute with Toby! I can't wait for more!
Well done! I love the suspense and Toby is adorable as always. I give you a 9/10.
Well, that was confusing. It must be me, but I have no idea what it meant. if Remus was lying to Harry when he outright asked, he deserves whatever ill feelings harry aims at him.
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