| Title: The Simplicity of Lies
| 05 May 2011 9:55 pm
|
| Reviewer: Kristi (Anonymous)
| [Report This]
|
I can't wait to find out what Harry got himself into with Draco. There wasn't enough Severus or Toby in this chapter. Will we get to see more S.J.E-Snape correspondence?
| Title: The Simplicity of Lies
| 04 May 2011 9:00 am
|
| Reviewer: harryphila (Anonymous)
| [Report This]
|
thanks for the two chapters! i actually wrote a review after the first one but the website didn't accept it ("Please try again") and I must admit I don't have the patience to deal with all those computer issues and mistakes. So, sorry, you just get one review. I loved the first chapter - the way Harry picked up on the nuances not only about lily but about Snape also, the gift was a brilliant idea and so was your description of Snape's reaction. I have no idea why the headmaster is lying (although you probably have several reasons stashed away) and I loved the way you described that Harry is way more perceptive than Snape ever suspected. I'm also interested about this deal with Draco. Does Draco know about Toby? His "Yeah, I'd say" seems to indicate so. And about the deatheaters getting into Hogwarts without Draco - what about Pettigrew? He was a marauder and knows all the secret passages. And as an animagus he couls pass the wards around the castle - altough if you have him harm Toby I will hate you forever. Maybe he can threaten him and Harry can unleash his temper on him - preferably where Snape can see it... ;-)
Anyway, you'll think of something. Please update again soon!!!
Oooooooh. This is SO interesting! I'm really loving this! Can't wait for more!
Good chapter. Very confusing in a way, but I guess it'll all work out. I'm assuming that Draco is looking for a way to be friends again?
As for Death Eaters getting in--there's still Parkinson and Nott and I bet at least one of them caught on about the room of requirement. Also, there might be a way through the forest. Hmm...
| Title: The Simplicity of Lies
| 04 May 2011 5:31 am
|
| Reviewer: hawkswench (Anonymous)
| [Report This]
|
what about thru Honeydukes tunnel, what Harry used in his third year.
| Title: The Simplicity of Lies
| 04 May 2011 3:44 am
|
| Reviewer: heartstar (Anonymous)
| [Report This]
|
You just updated! ArG! do it again please LOL *S*
| Title: The Simplicity of Lies
| 04 May 2011 3:42 am
|
| Reviewer: heartstar (Anonymous)
| [Report This]
|
Oh I can't wai6t please update soon!!!!!!!!!!!! 9When you can ) i love this story!
| Title: The Simplicity of Lies
| 04 May 2011 3:42 am
|
| Reviewer: heartstar (Anonymous)
| [Report This]
|
Oh i can't Wait please update sooN!!!!!!!! (When you can) I love this story!
I loved how Harry call Severus on a lie!
So now Harry went from not been told the truth to being lied to. No wonder is pretty mad. I wonder how mad Severus wuill be when he will found out he's the one people are lying too! Wonderful chapter!!! (duh :p )
| Title: The Absence of Hatred
| 02 May 2011 9:57 am
|
| Reviewer: karee (Signed)
| [Report This]
|
i cant wait for them to find out the truth, i cant imagine how you will explain it, update soon pls
|