Excellent chapter. And while it is true that the discussion was wonderful, I LOVED the ending with the gift and Sev's reaction.
Bravo!
V.
| Title: Knowledgeable Discussions
| 29 Apr 2011 3:00 am
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| Reviewer: Pandora (Signed)
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Oh, I can't wait to read more of just Harry and Snape.I hope that Harry finds out that Snape is his father soon.
Great chappie. Still enjoying this story.
| Title: Knowledgeable Discussions
| 28 Apr 2011 4:53 pm
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| Reviewer: Jaylen (Anonymous)
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Really enjoying your story. You have a great imagination!! Can't wait for more.
I have one grammar correction for you. You wrote: "You give me the implication that I have wronged you somewhere along the line." It should be, "You give me the IMPRESSION that I have wronged you" or "You IMPLY that I have wronged you." Just thought you might want to know to improve your writing. Keep up the good work.
| Title: Knowledgeable Discussions
| 28 Apr 2011 3:16 pm
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| Reviewer: florence (Anonymous)
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oh my. this is a wonderful story! i truly cannot wait for the next chapter :)
| Title: Knowledgeable Discussions
| 28 Apr 2011 12:55 pm
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| Reviewer: heartstar (Anonymous)
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Oh This was wonderfull ! I await emore please thank you !
| Title: Knowledgeable Discussions
| 28 Apr 2011 11:01 am
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| Reviewer: harryphila (Anonymous)
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That was close - interesting cat you have there. Hasn't Toby caught on yet to the fact that Harry is not against Snape as much as he used to be? He seems to still be under the impression that Harry despises him. And I am very much looking forward to the talk between Harry and Snape. Will Severus see how much like him Harry really is? Will Harry keep in mind all that Eileen told him about Snape? Will they be able to keep their cool and surprise themselves by having a civil conversation or will one of them loose their temper?
Please update soon!!!
Author's Response: Yeah, and thank you. Toby doesn't think Harry hates Snape any more but he knows his brother doesn't trust the man nor give him a chance as Toby thinks Snape should be given now. Glad to hear it and Severus is in denial about how much Harry is like him yet he does notice several things. As for next chapter, you'll have to wait to find out. I'll be updating later tonight or tomorrow morning. Thanks for the review!
Oooooh! Yay! AMAZING chapter! I can't wait for more!
Wow. This "is" getting intriguing.
I can't wait to see what happens next.
| Title: The Spreading of Suspicion
| 27 Apr 2011 3:00 am
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| Reviewer: Pandora (Signed)
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I still love this story, but I don't remember seeing some of these updates. Maybe I didn't get the notices.
Nice chapter. Can't wait for more!
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