| Title: The Spreading of Suspicion
| 18 Apr 2011 1:33 am
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Sorry not to review but I seem to be missing chapters as I had to go back three chapters to get to this one which I had not read! I wonder if the updates are not getting through. I love your take on the party and the bit of mystery you have got going thank you
I really enjoy reading this story, Toby is such a cute character and having Irma as Snape's mother is very interesting.
The parchment rolls are a great idea (they reminded me of Riddle's diary).
I love the messages exchange on Christmas morning. Maybe Toby will start liking his dad a little more, if they will write each other.
I wonder how long Sev will need to understand that JSE and Harry are the same person! (Please don't answer at this question, too much spoiler)
I like the charmed parchment. I can't wait for more of this story!
I sincerely hope that one does not have to wait long for this story to be undated, (Or, for that matter, for our dear Potions Master to realize that he does, indeed, have two children, as this story is of the excellent sort and excellent things should never have to be waited for. =)
| Title: December Snow - part 3
| 14 Apr 2011 4:46 pm
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| Reviewer: Kristi (Anonymous)
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I am so glad there is a new chapter! I loved the Christmas correspondence between Severus and "S.J. E.". The rolls of parchment are more convenient in that they can ask and answer questions more quickly and no one else can read them. I liked when everyone was shocked that Harry wanted to speak to Severus. At first, I wasn't sure if I would enjoy this story but it soon became one of my favorites. I eagerly await your next installment.
| Title: December Snow - part 3
| 14 Apr 2011 12:01 pm
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| Reviewer: heartstar (Anonymous)
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Oh I hope to see more soon that you fo updatesing.
The parchment is a great idea. Christmas lunch was good too, but I keep hoping that Toby asks Harry to make the paternity potion and then have Toby be afraid of adding his blood so Harry shows him using his own blood. What a big surprise that would be. That way both boys get a least a grandmother.
The parchment is a great idea. Christmas lunch was good too, but I keep hoping that Toby asks Harry to make the paternity potion and then have Toby be afraid of adding his blood so Harry shows him using his own blood. What a big surprise that would be. That way both boys get a least a grandmother.
| Title: December Snow - part 3
| 13 Apr 2011 11:26 pm
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| Reviewer: hawkswench (Anonymous)
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I like the parchment rolls, you would have thought the original marauders would have thought of it during the school years to talk to each other in History of Magic class. Harry would have been better off with it as he could have talked to Sirus while at the Dursleys. Your reviews might have been off due to the security code giving ppl problems. I know it takes me a few times to get a review thru.
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