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Title: December Snow - part 3 13 Apr 2011 9:27 pm
Reviewer: anathi (Signed) [Report This]
    Another great chapter! Love the little touches, like Dumbledore's realistic reaction to Harry's rudeness and the fact that Snape's abrupt disappearence led Harry and Draco to look at each other in puzzlement. I like how Irma's acting in a Mrs. Weasley motherly way to Harry and how he responds abashedly. And Toby's objection to Snape's answer was priceless. Can't wait to see Snape's reply.
Title: December Snow - part 3 13 Apr 2011 6:56 pm
Reviewer: 1reader_1writer (Signed) [Report This]
    I liked the parchment idea, though it's rife for trouble *g* Poor Severus. I hope it keeps him thinking.
Title: December Snow - part 3 13 Apr 2011 6:13 pm
Reviewer: christy (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I dont think ive posted a review for this story before but its AWESOME. I check daily for reviews, can't wait for the next chapter!!!!
Title: December Snow - part 3 13 Apr 2011 5:08 pm
Reviewer: dolphindreamer (Signed) [Report This]
    Love the fact Harry actually proved himself! And I like how both Harry and Toby refuted Snape on the taste point! Very cute! And the sudden silence about actually speaking to Snape lol. So funny. Keep up the good work!
Title: December Snow - part 2 13 Apr 2011 4:54 pm
Reviewer: zalievana (Signed) [Report This]
    well, I think I already said so, but I guess it doesnt hurt to repeat myself occasionally: I LOVE THIS STORY :)
    these two chapters included. I admit that for a moment the Irma Pinces revelation felt kinda like "Luke, I am your father" moment (and I dont much like other stories copying that), a bit too dramatic. Though its curious that her name can be respelled that way...Anyway, I loved the chapter in general. :)
Title: December Snow - part 2 13 Apr 2011 1:32 pm
Reviewer: JMGodfreyIII (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I don't think "civilizedness" is a word, maybe you meant civility?

    Author's Response: According to the automatic spellchecking in place when I write my fics, it is indeed a word. Although it hardly matters, seeing as inventing words can be rather useful at times as well.
Title: December Snow - part 3 13 Apr 2011 8:37 am
Reviewer: Slegend (Signed) [Report This]
    Love the Parchment rolls...gives opportunity for much more play of conversation.

    Also loved the lunch.

    It will be fun when Sev begins to pick up on the clues that are all around him.
Title: December Snow - part 3 13 Apr 2011 8:02 am
Reviewer: B00kw0rm92 (Signed) [Report This]
    Ooooooh, I LOVED every bit of this! And I got an update on my birthday *happy dances*! Can't wait for more!
Title: December Snow - part 2 09 Apr 2011 2:23 am
Reviewer: Kristi (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Please, oh please, update! I love this story! I can't wait for Severus to find out about Toby and for Harry to find out that he isn't a Potter, but a Snape. How did Harry miss the reference to his mother after he found out that Madam Pince/Eileen's son was Snape? Harry himself is paying homage to his mother with the pseudonym Sirius James Evans. I so look forward to the upcoming chapters!

    Author's Response:

    How did not see it as a reference to his mother. Because Evan is not an entirely rare name. Plus, he is yet to trul absorb the entirety of what he has learned. I doubt that he could have linked it regardless, seeing the he doesn't know that Snape and Lily were friends, enough that Snape would add remembrance to her by nameing his son after her with the use of "Evan". Thanks for the review!

Title: Approaching Festivity 09 Apr 2011 1:16 am
Reviewer: Kristi (Anonymous) [Report This]
    So, Madam Irma Pince is Eileen Prince Snape. Is Toby allergic to mistletoe?

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