Well, I'm quite glad to find these two chapters all at once--glitch or no glitch. I enjoyed this chapter a lot. Poor Toby. I hope Harry pays more attention to him and that things warm up between Harry and Snape.
That was a tense chapter, sort of, though these things needed to be said. I wonder, if Harry knows how much he looks like Snape, how the man himself could miss it...
| Title: An Ultimate Change
| 03 Apr 2011 3:41 pm
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| Reviewer: Shadow (Anonymous)
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I'm happy that things are moving forwards. And I'm glad that Severus agreed that he will tell Harry about Lilly =o) and also that Severus see himself in his son =o)
Now I'm looking forward the Christmas! =o)
| Title: An Ultimate Change
| 03 Apr 2011 3:28 pm
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| Reviewer: Romanticide (Anonymous)
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I like the bit where Madame Pince called him Harry. And how Severus promised to tell him about Lily. I can't wait for the enxt few chapters.
Oh my! Now Sev will have to consider the possiblities--So how did "it" happen and when did Lily "change her mind" about the "daddy"?
Yes, I do see a stronger resimblance to Sev when Harry is as moody as he was in this chapter. So is Sev moody because he knows he is missing out on things as well. . .
Thanks for the update
V.
| Title: The Spreading of Suspicion
| 03 Apr 2011 12:48 pm
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| Reviewer: heartstar (Anonymous)
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I fell bad for Toby what caused him getting sick was it the running off earlier?
| Title: The Spreading of Suspicion
| 03 Apr 2011 12:46 pm
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| Reviewer: heartstar (Anonymous)
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Oh please update I know I have had midterms and haven't gotten a chance to really review I really love this story so keep up the great work Thanks..... More please *S*
| Title: The Spreading of Suspicion
| 03 Apr 2011 9:36 am
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| Reviewer: swetz (Signed)
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I missed the 'Father' detail about this fic :p.. I like this turn of events, the very curvy-turny thing right now. Looking forward!
| Title: The Spreading of Suspicion
| 03 Apr 2011 9:03 am
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| Reviewer: Amellia (Signed)
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| Title: The Spreading of Suspicion
| 03 Apr 2011 9:02 am
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| Reviewer: Amellia (Signed)
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I didn't think I would like this story at first and passed it over a couple of times. But then I decieded to read and now I'm glad I did. I'm just not too happy that there isn't another chapter to read after this one left so many questions. So I will wait patiently for the next chapter.:) Thisis a great story and this is the longest review I ever wrote for a story. LOL Keep up the good work.
Author's Response: Yeah? That can happen sometimes, I've done it myself. "Eh, maybe...I dunno, well I may as well give it a read to decide. Oh, hey this is actually pretty good!" Thanks for your review, I shall be updating again soon enough.
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