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Reviews For The Son Becomes the Father
I'm very curious to see how Harry will react to the discovery that Severus is his real father and how their relationship wil develop from then on, especially with the addition of Toby. And someone should teach Snape that there is a thing called contraception. Author's Response: Nice to know and glad to hear it. It will be a little while before that happens yet but it's building to that point, that big reaction and confrontation, in a way. Haha, no, Severus is unaware he has two sons, because how they came to be was no fault of his own at all, therefore contraception would have been no use anyway. Long story there, but he doesn't know because he has no reason to even suspect. More on that later. Thanks for the review.
Author's Response: Thanks, I'm thrilled to hear it, even if it's yelled :P. Yeah, he is and thanks. It will be a little while yet for ape to find out. And that concept of Harry's reaction is very intriguing, I believe I may use that, thank-you!! Your english is fine, I g what you were saying. Thanks for the review!
I loved the interaction between Irma and Harry, too. I hope Harry goes back and confides in her, or asks her more about her story, before the "discovery". A question - does Snape know Harry's his son, deep down, because your statement "Severus noticed that the change in the teenager was beginning to reflect externally as well" sounds like he's looking for signs. For reviews, what if you add an interesting question for people to answer in the reviews after each chapter? It could be about their opinions regarding what happend or what might happen. Keep at it!
I loved the interaction between Irma and Harry, too. I hope Harry goes back and confides in her, or asks her more about her story, before the "discovery". A question - does Snape know Harry's his son, deep down, because your statement "Severus noticed that the change in the teenager was beginning to reflect externally as well" sounds like he's looking for signs. For reviews, what if you add an interesting question for people to answer in the reviews after each chapter? It could be about their opinions regarding what happend or what might happen. Keep at it! Author's Response: Yeah, I can't just write about main characters in a story like this, I have to include the others as well as everyone has a part to play. Yes, there will be more of them in later chapters. Irma's character is one I intend to keep bringing into the story as she is very important later on. Harry will know most of the story before the "discovery" as you've called it. No, Snape doesn't know that Harry's his son, although deep down he can't deny that some things are quite similar or odd. This will be a little more evident later. All he knows is that something has changed with Harry a it's tht change he's keeping an eye on as he tries to understand what it means. He is looking for signs though, just not what you think it is ;). I considered that, maybe, although I think there has been a problem with the recent list too, hense less reviews lately. Thanks for yours!
As for reviews, I've been checking regularly for updates, but somehow managed to miss the past 6 chapters counting this one. Don't know what's going on with that, but that may by why your review count is down. |
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