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Title: The Spreading of Suspicion 02 Apr 2011 7:27 pm
Reviewer: JAWorley (Signed) [Report This]
    I think I'm still wanting to see Severus find out about Toby first before finding out about Harry, and then have him take Toby from Harry and then tell Harry to stay away from his son. I think that could be a tense moment, and lead to other angsty moments later on when Harry and Severus discover the truth about Harry later.

    You had Harry and Snape writing back and forth earlier in the book, but not since then. Have you abandoned that idea?

    Great story as usual!

    Author's Response: That is the plan, Severus will know about Toby before he knows about Harry. As for the taking Toby, not sure if that's how it's going to pan out yet, I haven't got that far ahead in planning although I've started it. The writing back and forth has not at all been abandoned, there are reason for it taking longer and it's because of those writing them. I am keeping this up again soon, it's a timing matter too.
    Thanks and thenk-you for the review!
Title: The Spreading of Suspicion 02 Apr 2011 6:54 pm
Reviewer: Phoenixfire (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Great story, I love Harry raising Toby but I can't wait to see Severus react to that. Please continue the story. I'm finding the story a bit slow building - which is good because you get to see Harry's changes slowly (instead of Harry's changing, Severus is his father, angst and the end). But that might be why there are less reviews maybe? I don't review very often, I just like to hover and read the stories :)
Title: The Spreading of Suspicion 02 Apr 2011 5:33 pm
Reviewer: Shadow (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I know that the updating is odd, but I'm really looking for updates every day... The last update there appeared three chapters at once too. At first I thought that I didn't catch the previous updates chapters, but today when you updated there were another new three chapters updated together at once... Odd... I don't know where mistake...
Title: The Spreading of Suspicion 02 Apr 2011 5:09 pm
Reviewer: Shadow (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Very well written =o)
    I think that if Harry would talk with Luna about this "secret", she could point out some things, even the truth. - Luna always see more than others and connects things like no one...
    ...So I'm looking forward the next chapters =o)

    ...And for the reviews - the story is updating with three chapters at once, can it be that people review only the last chapter?

    Author's Response: Thanks.  Luna can see more than most, which is why I'm keeping her appearances gradual for now ;). Happy to hear it. And really? I updated the last chapter a week ago and the one before that a few days prior. I had no idea it was coming up as updating three at once, how odd...
Title: The Spreading of Suspicion 02 Apr 2011 5:01 pm
Reviewer: Romanticide (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I like this story, and this chapter, but i think it could have a bit more action, maybe some more Madame Pince scenes?
Title: The Spreading of Suspicion 02 Apr 2011 4:53 pm
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    No, don't stop writing this fic.It's great.

    Oh oh! Harry doesn't suspect at all? I would imagine as he starts to look more like Snape, he might have questions.

    I'm dying to see if eventually Harry will change his mind and ask Snape as Remus suggested.

    Author's Response:

    I won't stop writing, I couldn't anyway. But my updates are slowing as I am less motivated to update as quickly with lesser responses than usual, making me wondering if anyone's actually liking it as much anymore, such as does less reviews mean it's less liked. I dunno.

    Harry just thinks he looks like him, he has no reason yet to think that his father isn't who he's been told he is. He may question it, but merely because he'll think it's odd. As or changing his mind about asking Snape I can't saying much about that, although something surprising will be happening soon with those pair in which MAY lead to that.

    Thanks for the review!!

Title: The Spreading of Suspicion 02 Apr 2011 4:45 pm
Reviewer: LaileeJane (Signed) [Report This]
    I love his fic soooooo much!
Title: The Spreading of Suspicion 02 Apr 2011 4:21 pm
Reviewer: snapefan_17 (Signed) [Report This]
    its great so far but i think personally concerntrates to much on harry and toby. it is well written and the plot is well developed so far. I would personally like snape to be more involved in the story. overally very good. :)

    Author's Response: I understand this, however Snape is going to be a much more frequent character soon, starting from this chapter. This is mostly from Harry's point of view, hense it's more relating to him than Snape. Glad you like the fic and thanks for the review!
Title: The Spreading of Suspicion 02 Apr 2011 3:53 pm
Reviewer: Meegie09 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I hope Harry gets some sense knocked into him and talks to Snape lol. Awesome story, I love reading it. Can't wait to see an update!
Title: The Spreading of Suspicion 02 Apr 2011 2:51 pm
Reviewer: ceccecblue (Signed) [Report This]
    Hmm. The little scenes with Harry and Toby are really sweet and well done.
    Looking forward to seeing what happens next.
    CF
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