I wonder when Snape will find out that Harry is his son as well as Toby. He was annoyed at the information about Toby being kept from him so he might want to know about Harry, too. It sounds like he has been invited into the Prince family so Severus will have to find out before long. I hope we have an update about Toby. This will be a big change for he and Severus both.
Another brilliant chapter. Considering Harry and his self-sacrificing ways, it made perfect sense that he would have kept quiet about his own relation to Snape. Despite his own desperate desire for and right to his own family, his first priority for a while has been Toby, and he probably wouldn't want to distract from his brother getting to know his father and getting a chance at a real childhood. That said, things will of course never be complete without Harry becoming a part of their unit. And now with Harry being the Prince heir, many interesting things are sure to be coming up. The scene with Harry communicating with Severus as S.J.E. was quite bittersweet. It calmed some of the feeling of rejection I felt for Harry being thrust back to Privet Drive, showing, as it no doubt did for Harry, that he and his father DO already have a relationship of understanding and respect, though through an alias. But as you mentioned, Severus is gaining some respect for Harry, as Harry, as well, both for his work defeating Voldemort, and for his successful brewing of the Paternity potion. Anyway, sorry for the long rambling summary of events you wrote into your chapter. I am waiting, impatiently as always, for what comes next!
| Title: Hello, Father
| 06 Oct 2013 11:57 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Very good chapter as how Severus reacted was completely IC.
beautiful chapter, I hope for another one (or ten) soon :)
| Title: Many Things Come to an End
| 06 Oct 2013 8:15 pm
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Oooohhhhh, good ending! I like that Harry is the Prince Heir. Can't wait for Snape to finally find out!
| Title: Many Things Come to an End
| 06 Oct 2013 6:52 pm
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Woah, this is amazing. But when will Snape find out that Harry is his son too?
I can't wait for that. It would be nice if they could all live as a family and Harry and Toby live as real brothers.
I'm looking forward to the next update.
Oh I can just picture Sev's face when he realizes that the manor welcomed Harry when it didn't him.
| Title: Many Things Come to an End
| 06 Oct 2013 3:16 pm
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Oho ooh, got a little sad there when Snape didn't take Harry but I suppose he still doesn't know the truth if Harry didn't tell him. Liked the end though. Can't wait for Harry to finally be rid of the dursleys.
| Title: Many Things Come to an End
| 06 Oct 2013 2:36 pm
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Very emotional chapter, had me in tears in the office with the whole family. If Severus was angry with Harry because he kept Toby from him, what is he going to feel when he learns of the Prince house because he will know the significance of house opening up to Harry?
Totally got caught up in it. Nicely done. Hope it gets updated soon.
Author's Response: Happy to hear that, thanks. I will be updating again soon.
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