| Title: Gryffindors and Slytherins - part 1
| 26 Mar 2011 7:28 am
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| Reviewer: JAWorley (Signed)
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| Title: Gryffindors and Slytherins - part 1
| 26 Mar 2011 7:03 am
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| Reviewer: B00kw0rm92 (Signed)
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Ooooooh, this is still SO SO GOOD!!!! I just ADORE this story! I can't wait for the next part!
| Title: Gryffindors and Slytherins - part 1
| 26 Mar 2011 6:57 am
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| Reviewer: Kayla Anne (Signed)
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This was just what I needed! I'm stuck in bed with a killer sinus infection and I was desperately hoping for someone to update and looky here! Now I'm going to drift off to sleep hugging a box of Kleenex thinking about what you'll do next.
| Title: Who is Mildred Merrengold?
| 25 Mar 2011 12:02 pm
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| Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous)
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Hahaha, silly Harry. He goes through a groundbreaking realisation that if he had followed the rules he wouldn't have put himself and others in so much danger and created so many problems, and then in the next second he begs Remus to keep Toby a secret ignoring the fact that keeping Toby at Hogwarts is breaking the rules :P
But I'm intrigued. The plot is unfolding!
| Title: Who is Mildred Merrengold?
| 25 Mar 2011 6:58 am
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| Reviewer: JAWorley (Signed)
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I can't wait to see more. I think you're doing really well!
I think maybe I'd like to see a scene where Severus finds out that Toby is his son and gets really mad at Harry and tells him to just stay away from Toby so he doesn't screw him up (or something), and he doesn't realize at that point that Harry is also his son, and Harry feels very upset to lose Toby and also to not have anyone... maybe Harry would feel jealous of Toby to suddenly have an adult that he does not.
| Title: Who is Mildred Merrengold?
| 25 Mar 2011 2:46 am
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| Reviewer: JAWorley (Anonymous)
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Oh, I can't wait for more! This is such an awesome story!
The way you have people finding out is very realistic... this is often the way it happens when someone has big secrets to keep. I'm surprised Harry isn't more anxious about people finding out. I would think there would come a point when he would realize, "Oh no... too many people know and there's a chance any of them could tell someone else..."
Awesome story! I can't wait to see some Harry/Sev or Sev/Toby parental action!
Author's Response: Thank-you, I'm always happy to hear that. Harry will be soon, since he's so focused on just having a plan and things working the way they should that he hasn't taken a moment for himself to just think about it all. That and he has his incredible sense of trust in people, so he doesn't really think anyone would tell. Unless they're an adult, because he has little reliance on them. Thanks! Thanks for your review, I will be updating sometime later tonight.
| Title: The Existence of Advantage
| 24 Mar 2011 8:36 pm
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| Reviewer: Pellegrina (Anonymous)
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I like it a lot so far! Justr one little thing: You nearly always use the word combination "in which" when only "Which" would be considered correct grammatically. "In which" means something like "in doing so" or "whereat", while you obviously only use it as a relative pronoun. In that case, the "in" is actually wrong and misleading. But other than that, it's a really amusing and original fic and plot! I'm really curiois to learn, how Snape can be both their fathers...
Loved it! Harry really is getting a rather large lesson in growing up fast. He's not doing that bad of a job of it either.
Thanks for the update!
V.
Good chapter! ^_^ Things are really starting to interesting...
Post more soon, please!
AWESOME!!! PLEASE UPDATE SOON! Oh and can you please have Harry start acting like Snape and have everyone find out later that he is actually Snape's son with Lily? That would be awesome!! Also instead of having Toby be a half-brother to Harry, can't he be Snape for real but having used a time-turner to protect Harry but due to a curse that hit him before he used the time-turner, made him in to a child and upon impact of landing in this time time, hit his head and lost his memories? It would be so cool-but it is an idea!
Author's Response: Thanks, I will be updating over the next few days.
Harry IS Snape and Lily's son in this, he just doesn't know it yet. Toby is not Snape, he is his own being and while your idea is interesting and would make a very intriguing fanfiction, it is not what is going on here. Toby is Harry's brother and snape's son, that is how I have planned everything. Not a bad idea, just not a good one for this fic. Thanks though.
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