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Title: Exceeding Expectations 21 Mar 2011 12:58 pm
Reviewer: Salena Knight (Signed) [Report This]
    Another great chapter! ^_^ I really like how you have Snape and Harry writing back and forth to each other. I like seeing what Snape thinks of him without knowing who it really is. Anyway, post again soon!!
Title: Exceeding Expectations 21 Mar 2011 10:53 am
Reviewer: heartstar (Anonymous) [Report This]
    OH Very Very Nice I love this Toby's first Hogsmead trip!
Title: Theoretical Solution 20 Mar 2011 11:32 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Great chapter thank you
Title: A Plan Undone 19 Mar 2011 5:11 pm
Reviewer: Harriverse (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I keep wondering why Harry doesn't call for Dobby. But I'm sure you have lots of interesting things to write about and that would defeat the purpose. Besides, I'm only on the second chapter.
Title: Theoretical Solution 18 Mar 2011 1:17 pm
Reviewer: Shadow (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Very nice chapter =o)
    I would like to ask: Does Severus know that he has two sons? From the chat with Tonks I think he knew about Harry, but does he know about Toby? Does he know that Toby's orphanage burned down and that Toby is supposedly dead for muggles? I would like to see his reaction when he discovers that his youngest son is 'dead' and than that he is alife... =o)

    Author's Response:

    Thanks. However, I cannot answer that question. The details of the conversation with Tonks is not quite as specific as you assume. He does not think his son is dead, because he has no idea who Toby is and therefore even if the details of the burned down muggle orphanage were brought to his attention, it would be meaningless to him.

    Thanks for the review, will be updating soon.

Title: Theoretical Solution 18 Mar 2011 12:27 pm
Reviewer: Phoenix1 (Signed) [Report This]
    Yeah I knew Dobby would work, and you also answered another question about Dumbledore seeing through invisibility cloaks. Over all this chapter smoothed over some questions and readied the stage for the next chapter... I love this story!
Title: Theoretical Solution 18 Mar 2011 10:50 am
Reviewer: heartstar (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I love where you are taking this how about child minding?
Title: Theoretical Solution 18 Mar 2011 7:17 am
Reviewer: Moon_Willow (Signed) [Report This]
    Wonderful. I still think Dobby shouldn't have to be the one to mind Toby. Dobby's a bit, well, too enthusiastic and will probably give in to Toby's wishes. A six year old and a house elf.. *shudders* I like how you portrayed severus this time. It's kinda fun! And Pince? What's going on in that bookworm's head?? Oh my, so many questions. Update soon.

    And for the chapter idea, how bout... Temporary guardian? or Plan in Motion? i suck at these, so... haha. I know i'm no help. ^^

    Author's Response: Thanks. I agree, however given the circumstances there is no other choice available to Harry and Toby at the moment other than to use Dobby. He may be an enthusiastic creature, but he obeys Harry and the teenager has made sure that Dobby understands this. Part of the childminding that house-elves have as their duties make sure they don't do as the child says unless the parent/master has okayed it first.
    Glad to hear it. Haha, plenty is going on in Pince's head, some in which will be revealed at the appropriate time.
    Thanks for the suggestions. I wanted to use "Plan in Motion" but still a bit too similar.I liked the "motion" but rhymed with the one I ended up choosing. Thanks though, and I shall be updating soon.
Title: Theoretical Solution 18 Mar 2011 7:07 am
Reviewer: Peach (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Great story so far. I can't wait to see what happens next!

    "A Solution" perhaps?
Title: Theoretical Solution 18 Mar 2011 6:25 am
Reviewer: Slegend (Signed) [Report This]
    Great Chapter! I really enjoyed it!

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