oh how i hate cliffies! Yet I'm not worried cause you'd never kill him off. I can't wait for more!
| Title: Secrets Revealed, Secrets Kept
| 17 Jan 2013 12:03 am
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| Reviewer: rosina (Signed)
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Oh dear. While I was enjoying reading the chapter I kept thinking everything was going too smoothly. Lucius stopping any trouble at the manor, and then Lucy and Remus getting along so well together. Not a good way for Harry to find out, but hopefully the work Severus has done with him will kick in and save the situation.
Very cute chapter! Please update soon!
Happy Holidays!
Having the wedding as a chapter on its own was a good idea, even if the chapter was shorter. It's a big day both in the story and for Sev and Lily so it made sense. I'm glad that Remus was invited to the wedding and would like to see him in future chapters.
Aww, this was so beautiful! I loved it. And I know that I would enjoy seeing Remus become closer to the Snape family. :)
Awe! This is really awesome! And *sigh* I love seeing these to together!
In my head I've always seen Remus and Lily getting along extremely well. I think Remus' main problem was that he was young and terrified of losing his friends. Being what he was I don't imagine he had too many so this led him to do things he knew were wrong. Like standing by and watching as James picked on Snape. I think Remus grew up and became a very responsible and good person, so yes I'd love to see Lily invite Remus to the wedding. Loved the chapter by the way. Nice talk with Theo.
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