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Title: Premonitions 26 Apr 2011 10:53 pm
Reviewer: Snapegirl (Signed) [Report This]
    This was a great chapter! I'm glad Ginny is okay and that Aubrey saw what was going to happen in time.

    Poor Draco! I hope he gets away from Lucius. Oh, and did you know that some words in this chapter are underlined and in different colors, like mask? Is that something that just happened, because it looks weird, almost like it's a hyperlink.
Title: Settling In 26 Apr 2011 12:22 am
Reviewer: Snapegirl (Signed) [Report This]
    I'm glad to see the two brothers bonding and that Harry (Aubrey) is friends with Draco.

    I see Sirius is still being an arse. So he's going to reject poor Harry because he's not who he thought he was. How very sporting of him. Well, with that kind of attitude, Harry's better off without him.
Title: Beginning To Live Again 26 Apr 2011 12:17 am
Reviewer: Snapegirl (Signed) [Report This]
    I like the vampires, they seem like decent sorts of people. So I guess Ambrosius is a sort of half-vampire?

    I'm glad they got to meet Artemis and she told Sev to go out and love and live again, because he's so miserable alone.

    As for the bats, well it does fit, even if it has been used before.

    Author's Response: its not really defined. he was bitten by an immortal but his magical core reacted and protected him a bit, he's not immortal but he will have an abnormally long lifespan.
Title: Draco's Defection 25 Apr 2011 10:00 pm
Reviewer: Poirot (Signed) [Report This]
    I liked the structure of this chapter and your plot is very interesting.

    In case you aren't aware, Lucius is autocorrectind to Luscious. It is very distracting to read, and may be making this seem funnier than you intend. You may want to correct that.

    If not, that's okay too. It's a good story!

    Author's Response:

    you're right, my only excuse is that i'm using a dinosaur aged computer when i right and it's always autocorrectiong everything i type. i appreciate the corection. thank you again for your review

Title: Draco's Defection 24 Apr 2011 1:40 pm
Reviewer: heartstar (Anonymous) [Report This]
    very very Interesting more please! And Happy Easter I am dying eggs as we speak!
Title: Draco's Defection 23 Apr 2011 3:42 pm
Reviewer: -NightRise- (Signed) [Report This]
    awesomeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
Title: Draco's Defection 23 Apr 2011 3:02 pm
Reviewer: Mervoparkite (Signed) [Report This]
    Two "less psychosto worry about"-LM was one sick dude!

    I enjoyed the chapter.

    Thanks for the update.
    V.
Title: Premonitions 15 Apr 2011 10:31 pm
Reviewer: projectjay (Anonymous) [Report This]
    loved this chapter. I hope that all will like both boys and not everyone against Harry since he is snapes son
Title: Settling In 08 Apr 2011 11:54 pm
Reviewer: Phoenix1 (Signed) [Report This]
    I can't wait until Hermione gets to spend time with the Snapes. As for Sirius no big suprise there.
Title: Settling In 08 Apr 2011 11:18 am
Reviewer: heartstar (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Padfoot sucks that is no way to treat Aubry/Harry! Harry is going to be crushed! More please

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