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Title: Settling In 08 Apr 2011 7:17 am
Reviewer: Slegend (Signed) [Report This]
    I really enjoyed the chapter and am excited to see what life will be like for the new fam....will Snape be the strict disciplinarian he's always been, or will his boys turn him into a softy? Guess we shall have to see...
Title: Settling In 08 Apr 2011 6:01 am
Reviewer: cara-tanaka (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh wow. Nice chapter. Update soon, please, I really want to see what happens next. :D
Title: Settling In 08 Apr 2011 5:27 am
Reviewer: Mervoparkite (Signed) [Report This]
    OOOOOH! Where is Molly with a good Howler? (Or better yet a cast iron skillet to whack Siri on the side of his head!) That boy had best cool his jets before he causes so much damage that he won't be able to fix anything once he realizes that he still cares for the little boy he was made God-father of. Its probably a good thing that he isn't at Hogwarts and "Harry" isn't at #12 or there would be a permanent rift there (and probably a smoldering whole in the ground were Siri once stood once Sev and Ambrosias finshed with him for hurting Aubrey)

    Thanks for the update.

    V.
Title: Beginning To Live Again 04 Apr 2011 6:31 am
Reviewer: LioSaoirse (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Much better!! I was actually able to enjoy a good chapter, but I was offended that you took such offense to contructive criticism. This was much better and flowed well!

    Author's Response:

    i'm sorry i offended you. i take a lot of pride in my work, and i was very grumpy when i repiled to you review. In all fairness, it did feel like i was being flamed.

Title: Retribution 04 Apr 2011 4:14 am
Reviewer: Snapegirl (Signed) [Report This]
    That was actually an awesome punishment! I loved it!

    I'm glad that Harry is willing to give Snape a chance and they are going to try and be a real family.

    On to the next part!
Title: Beginning To Live Again 03 Apr 2011 5:13 pm
Reviewer: Mervoparkite (Signed) [Report This]
    I liked the bats--sometimes steriotypes can be fun! And I liked the fact that She was able to come and speak to all 3 of her "boys" (not just the kids!)

    Thanks for the update--I look forward to "what's next".

    V
Title: Beginning To Live Again 03 Apr 2011 4:25 pm
Reviewer: cara-tanaka (Signed) [Report This]
    awesome, update soon :)
Title: Beginning To Live Again 03 Apr 2011 3:28 pm
Reviewer: Phoenix1 (Signed) [Report This]
    I liked that Artemis came back I think that was needed for a sense of closer for all of them. The bat animagus is kinda funny, and I think having a coven so close by will be a gentle support for the entire family.
Title: Telling Snape 31 Mar 2011 7:20 am
Reviewer: LioSaoirse (Anonymous) [Report This]
    You really need a beta! The grammar and mechanical errors are incredibly annoying when reading a fairly good story.

    Author's Response:

    no need to worry as i fixed the errors. and yes, i'm sure that this 'farily good story' is in no way as perfect as yours are...am i right?

Title: Telling Snape 28 Mar 2011 6:00 pm
Reviewer: Marie (Anonymous) [Report This]
    It's an interesting story, but I think you should find a beta. You have a bunch of spelling errors, you spelled Ambrosius's name 3 different ways in this chapter. It's really distracting to read.

    Author's Response: thank you for telling me, i believe i've fixed my errors!

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