Harry's a smart lad...Hope Moody and Snape make his desires come true...at least those that they can.
Argh, I just want to slap McGonagall one or two, Dumbledore's not far behind. Hooray for Snape and Moody!
Argh, I just want to slap McGonagall one or two, Dumbledore's not far behind. Hooray for Snape and Moody!
I adore the interaction between them but I hope things get happier soon!
Certainly a action packed chapter!
love it, can't wait for more
Another excellent chapter! It was so nice to find it on the recently updated list today. :)
I like how Severus has got the legal-eagle on the case now, and if I'm interpreting the little hint right, are the papers that Severus is referring to, perhaps, adoption or guardianship papers?
I've very much disliked Minerva's attitude towards and her biased actions toward Harry and the other Slytherins. She deserves what is likely coming to her!
BTW, in the following sentence, I think you wanted the word "propitious" instead of "precipitous".
"Well, then it is rather precipitous that you are going to begin learning how to occlude," Severus said at last, giving Harry the slightest of encouraging smiles.
I truly look forward to the new chapter. Well done!
Wonderful chapter, I am glad you continued with this. I don't know if I've Reviewed before, or if I've mentioned it before, but you do know that this qualifies for my Challenge? Indeed, over-qualified, and I think you've done better than I did answering my own challenge, even if you didn't enter it. Kudos, and keep on writing.
This is an awesome story! A bit disgusting and warped in parts, but overall a great story! I like that Moody is part of Harry's little "family" in the story.
This is an awesome story! A bit disgusting and warped in parts, but overall a great story! I like that Moody is part of Harry's little "family" in the story.
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