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Title: Fighting 19 Apr 2011 2:07 am
Reviewer: wandlorean (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Very lovely and painful way to end this chapter. Painful because I'm on edge now, anxiously waiting to find out how Snape reacts to Harry's facade crumbling.

    May I say, I absolutely love your Harry? He's much more clever, jaded, and cynical than canon Harry (completely understandable,look at what he's suffered through in your fic). There's a vulnerability inside him, somewhere deep down, but he remains quite hardened on the outside. I really enjoy your portrayal of him and am very much looking forward to the next chapter.

    By the way, the part where Snape reaches out and touches Harry's hand, the very hand that is missing several fingers, just cut me to the bone. Such a small thing, yet so meaningful and poignant. Amazing storytelling here.

    Author's Response:

    Geez, now you're making me sniffle. 

    Thanks.  :)  More to come in the near future.  Snape will be learning more of why Harry is having such a violent reaction NOW . . .

Title: Fighting 18 Apr 2011 11:45 pm
Reviewer: Caesara (Signed) [Report This]
    This chapter was so sad but well written as always :P I feel so bad for Harry and I hope that Snape can get through to him.
    It really was pretty cool how he messed up Aubrey though haha.
    Really great job! I can't wait to read more of this!
Title: Revelations 18 Apr 2011 7:14 pm
Reviewer: 1reader_1writer (Signed) [Report This]
    Great story. I was leery of a "burnt" Harry story because one I read before went a bit over the top by the time it got very far. This is really enjoyable.

    Author's Response: What do you mean by "over the top?"
Title: Fighting 18 Apr 2011 6:13 pm
Reviewer: p_stotts (Signed) [Report This]
    I wonder what will happen now that Snape has finally broken through that hard exterior of Harry's. Perhaps he can begin to build some trust between them?
Title: Fighting 18 Apr 2011 6:08 pm
Reviewer: DazzlingD (Signed) [Report This]
    good chapter. i hope Snape gets through to Harry.
Title: Fighting 18 Apr 2011 6:55 am
Reviewer: B00kw0rm92 (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh, Harry. I want to hug him. I'm not sure he'd let me, but I at least want to try. Can't wait for more!

    Author's Response: He wouldn't.  :P  But you're welcome to try.
Title: Potions 18 Apr 2011 4:03 am
Reviewer: Lissy (Signed) [Report This]
    Ah, that was an extremely well-written and intriguing story. I love how everyone's character has been maintained and how realistic this is. My especially favorite aspect of this story is that though Harry is disabled, he can and will stick up for himself be it against his house or anyone else.

    Oh, and kudos for adding Moody in here. That was exceptionally brilliant. =D

    Author's Response: Whoo!  I just really like Moody, for whatever reason.  :)
Title: Potions 13 Apr 2011 10:36 pm
Reviewer: LaPapillonne (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Oh, please do continue this! I love your Harry. I would also love to see his interactions with the other professors. The one with McG was great. I don't see her being dimwitted enough to fall for Harry's whole act either.

    Thank you,
    Adrienne
Title: Potions 08 Apr 2011 5:26 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Great chapter thank you
Title: Potions 08 Apr 2011 10:06 am
Reviewer: heartstar (Anonymous) [Report This]
    HMMM...... I wonder what will happen next More Please!!!!!!!!!

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