| Title: The Journey Begins
| 06 Apr 2011 12:38 am
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Love Severus' thoughts about Harry and life in general very funny.
I like. I think it is interesting. Not so sure that blunting Severus' claws was such a good idea. He should be able to defend himself. Blunting them so he couldn't 'accidently' hurt Harry sure, but not so sure about for everyone else. But at least he can bite. I use to have a cat that we had to get declawed (just the front), she never went out and was distroying to much. As a result she would bite. We counted it as fair, if you are going to torment the cat, expect it to stop you.
| Title: The Journey Begins
| 05 Apr 2011 9:54 pm
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| Reviewer: Chelle (Anonymous)
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Yes, I love this version of "Severus meets the Dursleys." He gets to see the family in their natural habitat without their fear of magic or Severus' dislike of Harry to cloud the issue. Very well written first chapter.
oh this is nice! i hope you write more soon.
It's an interesting idea and I like it so far. Keep it up!
This sounds really good - looking forward to some more!
| Title: The Journey Begins
| 05 Apr 2011 8:16 pm
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| Reviewer: Romanticide (Anonymous)
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Loved this. I can't wait for Sev to meet Marge and Ripper. And i wonder how Harry's going to run away with Sev after Aunt Marge blows up.
| Title: The Journey Begins
| 05 Apr 2011 12:47 pm
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| Reviewer: Zelda (Anonymous)
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I enjoyed this chapter! I like the plotline and can't wait for more :)
| Title: The Journey Begins
| 05 Apr 2011 8:34 am
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| Reviewer: kkj (Anonymous)
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WONDERFUL opening chapter! I am so looking forward to reading more of this story.
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