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Title: Arrangements 21 Jun 2011 4:01 am
Reviewer: Kristi (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Great chapter! I loved the interaction between Harry, Hermione, and Draco and Harry's concern for Severus if Voldemort returns. I can't wait to see the trip to Hogsmeade!

    Author's Response: Thank you! Yes, Snape had better take Harry to Hogsmeade soon, or Harry'll have to resort to Slytherin tactics ;)... thank you for sharing your thoughts!
Title: Arrangements 21 Jun 2011 2:22 am
Reviewer: Sirena (Signed) [Report This]
    It's nice alteration compeer to last chapter, so nice glow inside ^^
    (don't read it as last one was bad, it just made me really mad, but was really good written and all)
    I really like this Slitherin thing in Harry here ;D

    Author's Response: I'm glad you like Slytherin Harry - it's fun bringing out that side in him! Thank you for reviewing!
Title: Arrangements 21 Jun 2011 1:08 am
Reviewer: Izzy Barnes (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Hallo, after the dark mood of the last chapter, this one made me smile. I think that you have written Draco and 'Mione perfectly. They seem so believable. Harry and Severus are done expertly as well.
    I look forward to more!

    Author's Response: Thank you - yes, after the last chapter, I thought a lighter interlude was in order. Glad you're enjoying the story!
Title: Exorcism 19 Jun 2011 11:07 pm
Reviewer: TerkaJ (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Intense, high octane nightmare fuel *shudder* ...

    Author's Response:

    Thank you :)!

     

Title: Exorcism 19 Jun 2011 6:58 pm
Reviewer: Katherine (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Great Story. It made me cry and get so mad at Pius bitch that I wanted to strangle him with my bare hands and then rip out his intestines and make him eat them. Tortureing children in any religion is wrong.

    Author's Response: It definitely is, and I know what you mean. Religious fanatics make me extremely angry, too. Thank you for reviewing!
Title: Exorcism 19 Jun 2011 5:05 pm
Reviewer: Hope_06 (Signed) [Report This]
    wow that was powerful Poor Harry no child should have to face that, hell no person shhould

    and Albsu crying thank you for actually givign him emotions. I think it made what Harry went through that much more powerful

    Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you liked Dumbledore's emotional moment - I like him very much as a character, and I'm glad I managed to show that he isn't indifferent to Harry's suffering. Thank you for reviewing!
Title: Exorcism 19 Jun 2011 4:27 pm
Reviewer: orpheneritus (Signed) [Report This]
    I've finally had time to catch up with your story. I must say I did give myself a few brownie points for guessing correctly, but I am glad you didn't confirm or deny - I'd rather be surprised. I just like to share my thoughts. You can congratulate yourself for all that foreshadowing you did!

    I am finding Petunia and Vernon so compelling in your story. It's a horrible mix of despising them and feeling sorry for them. I am really feeling Petunia's conflict between fear of Harry and an instinctive desire to not let a child be injured. I am half reminded of Carole Burnette in Annie, when the kidnapping plot goes to far for her loose code of ethics and she turns on her co-conspiritors. I like their complexity, I enjoy feeling conflicted about how I feel about a character and it makes them three dimensional. They are often characters that are portrayed as having only one side, so it makes a compelling change.

    It's an exciting and fresh take on the Slytherin Harry concept. I can't wait for the next part.

    Author's Response:

    Thank you! Yes, I was really surprised when you guessed correctly about the exorcism (and it was very tempting to give spoilers just then, but I'm glad I resisted!)

    Thank you so much for the feedback on Vernon and Petunia. The Dursleys are great fun when they're written with a slightly ironic undertone, like in the books, and I found it very challenging to make their fears and prejudices "real" and understandable. I'm so glad you think it worked!

    Thank you very much for the feedback, I hope you'll continue to enjoy the story!

Title: Exorcism 19 Jun 2011 11:29 am
Reviewer: silvermoonfae (Signed) [Report This]
    Excellent chapter. Sad, poor poor Harry. But well written. Can't wait for the next chapter. :)

    Author's Response: Thank you! Yes, Harry hasn't had much of a childhood - until now, that is. The next chapter will be up soon!
Title: Exorcism 19 Jun 2011 12:51 am
Reviewer: Mana (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I really appreciated the chapter note in the beginning. Thank you very much for that. ^^ Anywho~ This chapter was really tough to read but also enjoyable because now all the pieces are slowly coming together; it was amazingly written and I honestly can't wait for the next chapter! I felt so bad for Harry, I was shaking. You definitely made the priest very easy to hate! Haha. I want a swing or fifty at him around so bad. >:|

    Author's Response: I'll hold him for you (the priest, I mean)! I'm glad you liked the chapter, and you're very welcome about the chapter note; I'm glad I didn't come across as discriminating, because that really wasn't my intention. Thank you very much for reviewing!
Title: Exorcism 19 Jun 2011 12:18 am
Reviewer: Vulpixer (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Woah... I'm just speechless after that one.. What a powerful, frightening, sad chapter. Poor sweet Harry... It's no wonder he thinks magic is evil now.. *cradles him* Can't wait for the next chapter!

    Author's Response: Yes, poor Harry; it's good he has Snape and his friends. I'm glad you liked the chapter, thank you for sharing your thoughts!

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