| Title: Epilogue: Malfoy Manor
| 20 May 2014 1:15 am
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| Reviewer: catlover (Anonymous)
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Thanks for a wonderful story! I t was great that you posted the chapter on Draco's party, considering the many references to the party, the story had not felt complete without it, the party also marks the beginning of a new, brighter life and future for Snape and Harry. A fitting end -and beginning: Sequel, please!
| Title: Epilogue: Malfoy Manor
| 18 May 2014 2:12 am
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| Reviewer: hpssforever (Anonymous)
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Great story! Very interesting to read the whole thing from Snape's point of view, you portray him and his relationship to a Slytherin Harry very well. Love your Harry too, you have succeeded well to portray him as a Slytherin, with a dark past, he is a very intriguing character, and also a very sweet boy! If anything, I would have liked a bit more interaction between Snape and Harry ( for example, in this chapter). Would love to see their relationship evolve in a Sequel! Overall, a fascinating and moving story with a clever and interesting twist to the canon plot line ( both book 1 and 7). Thanks for a great read!
| Title: Epilogue: Malfoy Manor
| 17 May 2014 7:50 pm
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| Reviewer: Miss Prince (Anonymous)
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Hi, Thanks for a wonderful story! Full of suspense, emotions and drama, you got me hooked from the beginning.
The party was a fun read, and an excellent "normal" ending to such a dramatic story. I really liked your characterization of Snape and Harry. Snape was very beliviable in his reactions to a Slytherin Harry, and your Slytherin Harry was a very interesting and fascinating character, with an even worse background than canon Harry, that was hearwrenching to read... I am so happy that he is now free, and can enjoy a (somewhat) normal childhood with Snape as his guardian, and I am also very happy for Snape, now he is no longer lonely, with Lily's child to look after.The party in the end was a very fitting example of Harry's new life. I am also glad that he has Draco and Herminone, but I wonder, if he will ever be friend with Ron as in canon? I would love to see a continuation , how will Harry's future turn out as Snapeäs apprentice? Sequel, please!
Awesome story, loved your Snape and your Slytherin Harry! You are a very good writer.
| Title: Survivor
| 17 May 2014 3:07 am
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| Reviewer: a reader (Anonymous)
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Wow, that was intense, and hilarious!What a schock and relief for Sev and Dumbledore... I am so glad that Harry is alive! It would have crossed Sev's heart, had Harry died, I am so glad that he decided to come back for "professor Snape". You have a very interesting writing style, especially in your portrayal of Snape, a slightly ironic humor..in the midst of all the drama...I also love your emotional Dumbledore in this chapter, I am glad that you made him human, and not the manipulative, cold and sometimes evil man he is in some fics, love his reunion with Harry... Very interesting twist to the horcrux idea from canon, and here it was Harry who was possessed, not Quirell, but now he is free! Brillant plot!
| Title: Epilogue: Malfoy Manor
| 17 May 2014 2:46 am
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| Reviewer: severina (Anonymous)
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| Title: Epilogue: Malfoy Manor
| 17 May 2014 2:33 am
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| Reviewer: severina (Anonymous)
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Hahaha... that was a fun read!, and realistic portrayal... poor Sev! Good for Lucius to have him there, though. It was so nice to see Harry enjoying himself as a normal child... To imagine that the Malfoy's inivited Hermione! But you made it very beliviable. Maybe there is hope for a change in atitude, now that Draco has befriended Harry.
Excellent story! Really heartwrenching... Full of angst, horror but also of hearthwarming love, hope, friendship and humor.. You are a very good writer, love your portrayal of Snape and Harry, my favorite chapter is "the boy under the tree". This chapter was an excellent end - full of hope and joy... In many ways it was also a beginning- I would love to see a sequel! Please, I would really love to see Harry's and Sev's relationship develop as master and apprentice.
Thanks for sharing, looking forward to read more from you!
| Title: The Child Under The Tree
| 17 May 2014 2:16 am
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| Reviewer: cinderella (Anonymous)
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This is just beatiful. lOVELY chapter, loved the reunion of baby Tom and his mother, that was an interesting, unexpected solution, I am so glad that Harry will return and that he is free! That was a relief, although I kind of suspected this turn of events... Harry meeting his parents was so hearhwarming, my favourite part, a moment/privilege Harry will treasure for the rest of his life ... the whole story is really an emotional roler-coaster... So beatiful! This, and the chapter, when Hary wakes up, are my favourites in a favourite story...
| Title: Later
| 17 May 2014 1:10 am
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| Reviewer: angelique (Anonymous)
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Wow, a lot of emotions in this chapter, I really like your portrayal of Snape and his inner thoughts,self-doubt and tremor, and so on, now that he has the full responsiblity of a young child... I really like the idea of Harry as Snape's apprentice, and it was fascinating to read about the ritual... I would love to see and sequel to this story, in order to see how their life turns out as master and apprentice... I love your Harry and Snape, and the alternate universe you created in this story! The climax and top moment in this chapter was their conversation about Lily and the end, Harry delivering Lily's greeting from beyond the veil... wow, that was powerful!
| Title: Press Cuttings
| 17 May 2014 12:54 am
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| Reviewer: Angelique (Anonymous)
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Great chapter, as usual... No, I was not surprised that Harry ends up as Snape's apprentice ( considering the clues in Snape's thoughts earlier). I would have loved to see Harry's reaction when Snape brought him the news,i.e. to read the following conservation between them... anyhow, awesome story, I love it!
This story, this whole damned thing, made my heart sing in way I never thought possible. Thank you so much for this, I think you've ruined me.
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