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Title: Visits 11 Jun 2011 10:21 pm
Reviewer: LaPapillonne (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Yes! Here is chocolate, Belgian chocolate :] with truffle filling.

    I'm quite engaged by this story, please continue all your hard work :]

    -Adrienne

    Author's Response: Mmmm, thank you! Do you by any chance know Narcissa Malfoy :)? Glad you like the story, thank you for the chocolate!
Title: Visits 11 Jun 2011 7:00 pm
Reviewer: DestinedMommy (Signed) [Report This]
    this is getting really good!! can't w8 'til the nxt chapter!

    Author's Response: Thank you, I'm glad you like where this is going! Next chapter should be up soon!
Title: Visits 11 Jun 2011 6:21 pm
Reviewer: Mervoparkite (Signed) [Report This]
    I repeat--Poor Harry. It's going to take more than a few gentle (or even pointed) questions from Sev to get information out of our boy. I get the feeling he has been trained very well not to talk.

    Or, if he really does not know about the injuries, then that open a whole different can of worms--one that has the figerprints of old snake face all over it.
    I loved the visit and the Dichotomy
    between Draco and Hermionie's views on the world.

    Thanks for the update.
    V.

    Author's Response: You're right, Snape won't get any information out of Harry just by asking! I'm glad you like Draco and Hermione; they're very different but both quite quirky in their own way, which makes them fun to write. Thank you for reviewing!
Title: Visits 11 Jun 2011 5:46 pm
Reviewer: Invisible Observer (Signed) [Report This]
    I'm loving the friendship between Harry, Draco, and Hermione. I would love to see Lucius' face when Draco tells him that he wants the Boy-Who-Lived and a Muggleborn at his birthday party. Can't wait to read more!

    Author's Response: Poor old Lucius! But yes, I'd like to see his face, too :). Thank you for reviewing!
Title: Scars 10 Jun 2011 7:19 am
Reviewer: wynnleaf (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I like the rapport between Snape and Harry. Nothing spoken, but a strong sense of trust.

    Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad I managed to get the sense of trust between Snape and Harry across; they're both not the type to speak openly about their feelings.
Title: Scars 09 Jun 2011 11:41 pm
Reviewer: DestinedMommy (Signed) [Report This]
    oh poor harry!
    i hope u update soon!

    Author's Response: Thank you! The new chapter should be up today :)!
Title: Scars 09 Jun 2011 10:45 pm
Reviewer: Inu Chan (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Loving it, especially having the teachers speak Latin in front of the kids. Can't believe nobody else has done that. Write more soon.

    Author's Response: Thank you! As for the use of Latin, I always wondered why Hogwarts didn't teach any foreign languages - they could teach languages traditionally associated with witchcraft, like Latin, Greek or maybe Egyptian. So I thought that maybe Latin was taught at some point, and the older generation still remembers it. I'm glad you liked that little detail! Thank you for reviewing!
Title: Scars 09 Jun 2011 3:57 pm
Reviewer: Hope_06 (Signed) [Report This]
    wow that was amazing and i agree with Poppy there is defintly some sort of rapport between Severus and Harry. perhaps Harrysees a bit of a kindred spirit!!!
    love the use of latin
    Severus is defintly in for a difficult convosation with Dmbles that is for sure

    Author's Response: Yes, Harry and Severus probably have a similar outlook on the world, i.e., a distrustful one. Thank you for reviewing, I'm glad you're enjoying the story!
Title: Scars 09 Jun 2011 2:13 pm
Reviewer: alwaysmaddi (Signed) [Report This]
    This is a really enjoyable read, it is easy to follow, without being too predictable. It is intriguing and makes me want to keep reading. =]

    In a few places I think you should work on your phrasing, as the story seems to lose its flow. Maybe reread it another time, and don't be afraid to make changes?

    Keep it up =]

    Author's Response: Thank you! And thanks for the heads-up on the phrasing, I'll try to improve that. It would be great if you could let me know what lines/passages you were referring to exactly; I don't have a beta for this story, so any advice is much appreciated. Thanks again!
Title: Scars 09 Jun 2011 3:47 am
Reviewer: DS (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Wow! I loved the story! I mean, it's dark and sad, but I loved how Snape is in this story and how Draco is also. I hope they will support Harry and grow into a trusting companionship.

    Author's Response: I'm glad you like Snape and Draco; yes, Harry's lucky to have them. Thank you for reviewing!

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