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Title: Alliances 04 Jun 2011 11:35 pm
Reviewer: Gretchen (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Ooh, this took a turn for the creepy. I can't wait for the next part!

    Author's Response: Creepy Harry, indeed. Thank you for reviewing, the next part should be up fairly soon!
Title: Alliances 04 Jun 2011 10:54 pm
Reviewer: ObsessiveaboutSnape (Signed) [Report This]
    Slytherin took care of their own. Oh yes they do. Wonderful Job. You've got me intrigued with those glowing eyes and Harry thinking magic is evil. can't wait to see your next update. great Job!

    Author's Response: Yes, I always imagined Slytherin House as a closely knit community who solved their problems internally. It seems the way they would handle things. I'm glad you like the story - more will be up soon!
Title: Alliances 04 Jun 2011 9:59 pm
Reviewer: LegolasAnimeLuver (Signed) [Report This]
    AWESOME! Please update soon! I have to know what happens next!

    Author's Response: Thank you! The next chapter will be up fairly soon, don't worry :)!
Title: Alliances 04 Jun 2011 7:03 pm
Reviewer: p_stotts (Signed) [Report This]
    And the mystery grows deeper! It's not hard to surmise why Harry thinks magic is evil... but what's this with the glowing white eyes? Hmm... I look forward to reading more.

    Author's Response: I think the next chapter will solve part of the mystery *tries hard not to give spoilers*. Thank you for the feedback!
Title: Alliances 04 Jun 2011 6:09 pm
Reviewer: DestinedMommy (Signed) [Report This]
    i absolutely loved it its written like it real n i can really believe wat i read i really like how ur portraying all the characters, esp. snape and harry keep up the good wrk and i hope to hear from u soon!
    btw did u no that Sita is the name of a great great woman that lived a long time ago?

    Author's Response: Thank you, I'm so glad you like it! Wasn't there an Indian goddess named "Sita"?
Title: Alliances 04 Jun 2011 4:21 pm
Reviewer: Hope_06 (Signed) [Report This]
    hmmm Harry is defintly mysterious and things are slowly starting to stand out i am interested in what is next

    Author's Response: Yes, Snape had better be careful... thank you for reviewing!
Title: Alliances 04 Jun 2011 3:12 pm
Reviewer: Mervoparkite (Signed) [Report This]
    Harry is a bit creepy at times, isn't he? Not nessasarily in a "dangerous" way--maybe just a bit other-worldly. . .still not the right term, but closer.

    I am really enjoying your take on the story, and I'm looking forward to your next update.

    Thanks for posting.
    V.

    Author's Response: You're very right about Harry (that's all I'm going to say at this point; I don't want to give spoilers :) ). I'm glad you're enjoying the story, thanks for letting me know!
Title: Emergency Rations 04 Jun 2011 5:35 am
Reviewer: DestinedMommy (Signed) [Report This]
    very well written!! im glad u updated!! im very interested in this story n i hope that u update soon!!

    Author's Response: Thank you! I'll update today (after a few final editing touches), so stay tuned!
Title: Emergency Rations 04 Jun 2011 4:58 am
Reviewer: Incendiarist (Signed) [Report This]
    *thinks*
    I don't think I've reviewed this chapter yet...
    Anyway:
    Much better. No eleven-year-olds' essays, thank Minerva.
    A tad short; I'd have liked to have seen more of Severus' thoughts, as well. And I'd definitely like to see more hints of Harry's home life - I'm interested to see your take on the abuse; everyone has such differing ideas, it's hard to gauge what 'Abusive Dursleys' on the warnings list for a story actually /means/.
    Also, I've got the idea that I'm bringing down the fic's number of chocolate frogs. I'll apologise for that now; it's not that I dislike the story (no matter what I say in reviews or ratings), but I don't sugar-coat, and I'm rather sure I've never rated an amateur literary work as 10/10. There might be two or three professional works. But in any case, don't be put off by it. A seven is as close to praise as I'm likely to give.
    ~Lakhesis

    Author's Response: Well, I'm glad you approve ;). Chapters will get longer as the story progresses, and you'll learn about Harry's home life and the Dursleys in due time. Thank you for reviewing!
Title: Emergency Rations 03 Jun 2011 2:19 pm
Reviewer: S.S (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Brilliant chapter and I can't wait for more.. I would love to see how Severus handles Harry and how their relationship will develop

    Author's Response: Let me say this, Snape's going to have his hands full... thank you for reviewing!

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