| Title: Emergency Rations
| 02 Jun 2011 4:15 pm
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| Reviewer: TATIS (Signed)
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very good, poor harry , I love this Snape
Author's Response: Thank you, I'm glad you like my Snape (not that he's mine... don't I wish^^)!
Great update, but too short! *whine* Love this story! I think you're writing both Severus and Harry very well. I wonder what Dumbledore will say when he hears Harry's relatives have been starving him? Hopefully, he won't be a dork about it.
Author's Response: Thank you! Yes, I noticed that the chapter was quite short when I saw the word count after uploading, but don't worry; the chapters will get longer as the story progresses, I promise :)! Thank you very much for the feedback!
| Title: Emergency Rations
| 02 Jun 2011 12:55 pm
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| Reviewer: Gretchen (Anonymous)
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Oh, I'm so glad you updated this tonight! Poor Harry. His food collection is one of the saddest things I've ever read. :( I hope it gets better for him soon now that Snape is on the case.
I love how you wrote Draco, too. Him criticizing Harry's clothes and insulting Crabbe and Goyle is so in character. I can completely imagine him slipping in concerned little comments about food hoarding in the middle of that.
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you liked Draco; we'll be seeing more of him in the upcoming chapters. Yes, Snape will definitely keep an eye on Harry from now on. Thanks for sharing your thoughts!
Again, well done and I can't wait for more!
Author's Response: Thank you, I'm glad you liked it!
| Title: Essays
| 31 May 2011 6:59 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Loved the essays you caught the children so well but I'm confused about Blaize is he a girl in this story?
Author's Response: I think I created some confusion by not placing Blaise in Harry's dorm, lol! Blaise is actually his canon (male) self; it's just that I had this idea that there were several dorms for the first-year boys - which I'm beginning to think is not what everybody else thinks! Anyway, thanks for reviewing, I'm glad you liked the essays!
| Title: Essays
| 31 May 2011 5:54 pm
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| Reviewer: tommy's girl78 (Anonymous)
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i like this stories so far hope you update very very soon
Author's Response: Just got a bit of final editing to do, so I should be updating some time tomorrow... thank you for letting me know what you think!
Brilliant! Can't wait for more! xx
Author's Response: More will be up soon! Thanks for reviewing!
wow well done love that you got the personality of each child so well and Harry's essay yeah defintly more questions than answers poor Severus. Can't wait for the next chapter
Author's Response: Yes, Snape has his work cut out for him... thank you very much for sharing your thoughts!
| Title: Essays
| 31 May 2011 7:58 am
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| Reviewer: Deco (Anonymous)
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Liked the highly characteristic essays.
Author's Response: Thank you, I'm glad you enjoyed them!
| Title: Essays
| 31 May 2011 4:33 am
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| Reviewer: Doxie (Anonymous)
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Interesting and fun start. Can't wait for your update.
Author's Response: Thank you! The next update should be coming soon.
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