I do wonder where this would go. It's not fair to tease and leave it like that. But it's a good start :)
| Title: Deliver My Letter Please, Hedwig?
| 29 May 2011 12:53 am
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| Reviewer: Kristi (Anonymous)
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You've got to continue! You can't just leave us hanging like this. It sounds like Snape didn't know that he could be Harry's father. However, it could be seen that Hedwig thought that Snape would be a good father figure for Harry.
| Title: Deliver My Letter Please, Hedwig?
| 29 May 2011 12:15 am
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| Reviewer: DazzlingD (Signed)
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| Title: Deliver My Letter Please, Hedwig?
| 28 May 2011 11:24 pm
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| Reviewer: christy (Anonymous)
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OMG you totally need to continue with it!!!! Why is Snape so pissed??? Did he know, does he think harry is playing a joke, is he worried about harry????
PLEASE CONTINUE !!!!!!!!!!!
| Title: Deliver My Letter Please, Hedwig?
| 28 May 2011 11:10 pm
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| Reviewer: lunaz (Anonymous)
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Wow that was an interesting beginning and yes please continue. Is Snape really Harry's father or did Hedwig picked Snape out to be Harry's new father. I would like to see where this goes.
Please. Please. PLEASE CONTINUE!
This is amazing! I love the shock at the end, so pure! The letter in itself is heart-breaking, and I love how you show Harry's concern for Hedwig. Haha! I love Snape's face!
Do continue!
--Alis Syn
| Title: Deliver My Letter Please, Hedwig?
| 28 May 2011 9:37 pm
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| Reviewer: Kristeh (Signed)
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This is a really great story! And yes, it's just begging to be continued! I love your insight into Harry's emotions and thoughts, how he just couldn't help but send the letter off with Hedwig, how he longs for a father and a real family.
I'd love to read more!
| Title: Deliver My Letter Please, Hedwig?
| 28 May 2011 9:25 pm
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| Reviewer: Vulpixer (Anonymous)
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Gaaaah!!! It can't be allowed to just end there! That... need.... more.... Ahhhh!!!! I can't even think straight that was sooo good!! I insist upon more chapters! And if demanding doesn't work.. *holds up a scowling Snape Plushie and shy smiling Harry Plushie* You know you want them.. But only if more chapters.. >:)
Ah - what a brilliant take on this challenge. Can't remember if such a thought ever occurred to me or not. I don't believe it did... *shrug*
ANYHOW, I really enjoyed this, and you choose to expound upon that which you've already written, I'd certainly be interested. Bravo. ^^
| Title: Deliver My Letter Please, Hedwig?
| 28 May 2011 8:38 pm
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| Reviewer: Eunmira (Anonymous)
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Nice one, very, very interesting. Would be better if there's a continuation. :)
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