| Title: Gifts
| 26 Jun 2011 11:57 pm
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| Reviewer: LGW (Anonymous)
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I have a question, Jamie.
Has anyone noticed that Harry is still refering to Severus as a. Sir and b. Professor? It just seemes that everyone corrects Draco or Harry as to what to call them. hmmm...I believe you're waiting for something else.
I've missed your stories so very much, but seeing as I've been a tad lost in 'real life' myself, I can't blame or scold you either.
Update soon, I'll be waiting. :D
Your long and lost time friend,
LGW - Gaby
Ahhh. Another amazing chapter. I hope that the next one comes soon... (although, as a writer I know that's not always easy, as a reader I just can't help but say it. Lol) ...I thought this chapter was absolutely brilliant! It was sweet. I am glad that Harry is finally getting to live happy moments. I'm sure there will be family troubles right around the corner though. Hardy does have a knack for disobeying rules and now that he has that invisibility cloak......
I love this story. It's so sweet! Adorable.
| Title: Gifts
| 26 Jun 2011 6:48 pm
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| Reviewer: Shadow (Anonymous)
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| Title: Gifts
| 26 Jun 2011 6:40 pm
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| Reviewer: Kristi (Anonymous)
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You meant to say "their" instead of "they're" when Percy was talking about the twins. You misspelled Aberforth's name. I hope the Brutus Malfoy that you mentioned is a descendant named for the one that is mentioned in Tales of Beedle the Bard, because that one lived in 1675. Grandpa Alby, ha ha! Severus probably will not be pleased with Dumbledore for giving Harry James' invisibility cloak and Harry had better rethink using the cloak to search the Restricted Section. Brilliant chapter! I'm glad that they all had a great Christmas!
As always your work is clear and excellent. I'm sorry I've been neglecting to review this story but I do love it. Please keep updating at this intensity, it's excellent!
| Title: Homework and Hogsmeade
| 22 Jun 2011 2:58 am
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| Reviewer: Kristi (Anonymous)
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Great chapter! Can't wait to read about Harry's first Christmas at Hogwarts and with his family!
| Title: Homework and Hogsmeade
| 22 Jun 2011 12:00 am
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| Reviewer: Shadow (Anonymous)
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Wow! Superb chapter =o) I can't wait for the Christmas day!
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