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Title: Homework and Hogsmeade 21 Jun 2011 7:54 pm
Reviewer: Snapegirl (Signed) [Report This]
    Sounds like they had a fun time shopping and everyone will get what they most want for Christmas. Of course the best present is one you can't buy--a family.

    I'm glad Dumbledore took discovering Lily's alive as well as he did and also that Severus is Harry's son.

    It's good to see that Toby and Sev are getting along. Can't wait to see Christmas and what Ron says about Severus being Harry's dad.

    The jewelry sounds beautiful.

    Oh, and I've updated Lily's Defender again. Severus finally sees Lily after all those years.
Title: Homework and Hogsmeade 21 Jun 2011 4:54 am
Reviewer: S.S (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I love the new chapter... Alas all the family is coming together... The story line is absolutely superb and I look forward to reading more
Title: Homework and Hogsmeade 21 Jun 2011 4:42 am
Reviewer: cara-tanaka (Signed) [Report This]
    Update soon :D
Title: Father-Son Talks 19 Jun 2011 1:28 am
Reviewer: Snapegirl (Signed) [Report This]
    Great chapter! I hope they grow closer over the holidays.

    But it will take time to get over the past.

    Why was it that Albus never acknowledged Eileen as his daughter? And why would he allow his own grandson to be bullied by the Marauders, even if one of them was his other grandson? I don't quite get why he wouldn't make an attempt to stop the Marauders from doing what they did, or why he didn't persuade Severus that he had something left to live for besides the dark path?
Title: Father-Son Talks 19 Jun 2011 12:21 am
Reviewer: Shadow (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I see that Snape' family is getting bigger and bigger =D And I'm looking forward the Christmas season =o)
    Update soon, please! =o)
Title: Father-Son Talks 18 Jun 2011 11:24 pm
Reviewer: S.S (Anonymous) [Report This]
    The new chapter was brilliant... The only problem is that it isn't long enough (haha). I can't wait for more.
Title: Father-Son Talks 18 Jun 2011 7:20 pm
Reviewer: cara-tanaka (Signed) [Report This]
    Awesome chapter. Update soon
Title: Father-Son Talks 18 Jun 2011 6:42 pm
Reviewer: Kristi (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I loved the father-son talks in this chapter. Can't wait for more!
Title: Family Matters 15 Jun 2011 11:57 pm
Reviewer: Mervoparkite (Signed) [Report This]
    Great chapter! While Harry shouldn't be afraid to ask if he can stay with his father, Sev needs to realize that if he doesn't start initiating things like that--before Draco is involved--Harry is going to start feeling like an afterthought, a tag along, and not a real part of anything (other than his mom). As for Tobias, interesting twist--looking forward to "what's next"!

    V.
Title: Family Matters 15 Jun 2011 9:59 pm
Reviewer: S.S (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I really love the way the story is unfolding and I would love to read more

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