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Title: Lily's Mistake 11 Jul 2011 5:50 am
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Aw, that's so sweet. I hope that Severus steps up to the plate and fills his role as Harry's father.

    Great job with the changes Missy! Love it.
Title: As Fate Would Have It 11 Jul 2011 5:30 am
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Like this new version very much. Of course I like both versions. I am enjoying reading this story again, and it's just as wonderful as I remember.
Title: Come Again, Headmaster? 11 Jul 2011 5:05 am
Reviewer: JAWorley (Signed) [Report This]
    Not to be mean, but my personal preference is that I don't like reading flashbacks, so I find myself just skipping over them. I would rather just read the sequence of events straight through rather than forward then back, forward then back. A flashback every now and again isn't bad, but so far they're all over the place. Otherwise I'm enjoying the story.

    Author's Response:

    nah...You're not mean at all. To be quite honest, they are the only parts of the story I wish I could get rid of or find another place for.  But it would make rewriting this story even more of an undertaking than it already is and the information contained in them is vital.  There are a few more, but not many. After chapter nine, they're pretty much gone, so hang in there. I'm happy that you're enjoying the story otherwise.

    ~Missyann

Title: A Strange Sort of Gift 11 Jul 2011 4:46 am
Reviewer: JAWorley (Signed) [Report This]
    Love it so far!
Title: Out of the Æther 10 Jul 2011 9:02 pm
Reviewer: Ebbtide (Signed) [Report This]
    Gah! I love this story. Your writing is just amazing.

    Author's Response:

    Thank you!  *blushes*

    ~Missyann

Title: Thistles and Dandelions...Beware! 10 Jul 2011 7:35 pm
Reviewer: Ebbtide (Signed) [Report This]
    This story is awesome so far. I'm loving it! *runs to second chapter*
Title: A Bad Time to be a Death Eater 09 Jul 2011 3:41 am
Reviewer: Nightshade sydneylover150 (Signed) [Report This]
    I hope Sev returns to his son somewhat whole. I think the boy needs some support after dealing with Sirus.

    Author's Response:

    Well, we don't have to wait too long for Severus to return, though I can't say one way or the other how whole he will be.  And Sirius...well...Sirius isn't bad, he's just really confused.  It might take him a little more time to come to terms with some things.

    Thank you for your review. Glad to see you're enjoying my story.

    ~Missyann

Title: As Fate Would Have It 09 Jul 2011 3:17 am
Reviewer: Kristeh (Signed) [Report This]
    I like Harry's thoughts at the beginning. I think he shows such maturity and insight in recognizing how Severus felt so betrayed, in making connections to himself and how he would feel if one of his trusted friends betrayed him. Harry is such a great kid.

    Very good portrayal of Severus, too, and I like how he's already noticed that Harry is too thin and not well-cared for. If they're both determined to try to succeed at Occlumency and at least give one another a chance, they're making great progress already.

    And now the mystery vial! I'm looking forward to the next chapter!

    Author's Response:

    I'm so glad you're enjoying my story.  You right...Harry and Severus are already beginning to see that they might of had some misconceptions about each other. With any luck...it will help smooth things a little along the way.  ;>)

    Thanks for the lovely reviews.

     

    ~Missyann

     

Title: An Unwelcome Change in Perspective 09 Jul 2011 3:09 am
Reviewer: Kristeh (Signed) [Report This]
    Another great chapter! Boy, that sounds like a truly horrible potion that Voldemort is after, and I'm so impressed with Severus' courage and willingness to spy despite the dangers.

    I'm a little sad at the rift between Harry and Sirius, but I also think it's very understandable and believable. It's also right for Harry to be disturbed at the Marauders' past actions and Sirius needs to see that he (they) have been unfair to Severus for a long time. Though Remus seems to be much more open-minded, now at least.

    Great ending too. I can just picture Harry swooping away and the dumbfounded yet outraged expression on Sirius' face.

    But I do understand and agree with Sirius resentment of Dumbledore and his reluctance to trust in him again. There really was no excuse for the fact that Sirius didn't have a trial. With Veritaserum at their disposal, there is no excuse for anyone being wrongfully imprisoned in the wizarding world.

    Looking forward to more!
Title: A Bad Time to be a Death Eater 08 Jul 2011 11:54 pm
Reviewer: Victoire (Signed) [Report This]
    An awesome chapter - as usual. I can't wait for the next one... I am interested, what will happen next to Severus.

    Also, stay in good health!

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