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Reviews For Reaching Out
*nearly drooling over my keyboard in wait for even more Snape-Harry interaction* Your Melfis.
Their bantering/ arguments are brilliant and very in character. And oh, poor Sev feeling like he has no place to belong again. *sniff* But anyway, I like the slow uneasy progress. It will make it all the more sweet when/ if Harry and Snape finally learn to tollerate each other or maybe even love each other. Yours happily, Melfis.
Wow, the theory about their memories is brilliant and somehow I hope that they'll stay in that reality. Your Melfis.
I liked that Snape is starting to come around finally
" Glad you've updated. I like that Harry and Snape are finally starting to act like father and son. Let's hope it continues, and both Harry and Snape will finally get what they've desired...a family.
Severus had me going 'aw' the whole way through. I could literally feel the pain and longing radiating off him. (And the longing for more radiating off me) And the quill scene... If you're aiming to kill me with all those sweet-gruff-I'm-not-showing-my-emotions Sev moments, yes, you succeeded. I love the last sentence. It makes me yearn for more, especially now they're both left alone. And it makes me so so so sad to see Sev yearning for so much and yet, couldn't do a thing about that insecurity of his. Awesome awesome writing. Please, update soon? I'll give you a tropical quill? :) Author's Response: Haha, actually, it's is. I don't why why, but inspiration and ideas are just flowing for this fic. I have to work on my prompt fic, but than I'll be right back to writing more and sending chapters off to my beta once she's had a break from her own RL stress :P I'm really thrilled you liked those scenes and the fic. I can't give anything away yet, but I can say you'll like some of the developement occuring as soon as the next chapter. Thank you SO much for your review! :D I will update again as soon as I can.
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