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Title: A Very Potter Vacation 05 Aug 2012 4:04 pm
Reviewer: Lady Destiny (Signed) [Report This]
    Everything was going so well and all of a sudden! Poor Sev and Al. Can't wait to read more!
Title: Of Bonfires and Bullies 05 Aug 2012 3:00 am
Reviewer: bridgeportfox (Signed) [Report This]
    Good for Severus. Letting go of his grudge and saving Sirius. It was a good lesson for Sirius, too.
Title: Pre-Vacation Problems 05 Aug 2012 1:05 am
Reviewer: Lady Destiny (Signed) [Report This]
    I can't wait to read more. I'm really excited to read about Lily's entrance as well.
Title: Of Bonfires and Bullies 04 Aug 2012 11:57 pm
Reviewer: hpfanficfan (Signed) [Report This]
    Severus still got it, haha.

    I love it when Sev is cute. Alby is cute too, but it's especially heartwarming to see Sev snuggle up to Harry while eating smores.

    I wonder what Severus will be like when he grows up this time. Talk about an identity crisis.

    They've all come so far. Harry, Sirius and Severus
Title: Of Bonfires and Bullies 04 Aug 2012 10:05 pm
Reviewer: crazychick84 (Signed) [Report This]
    Totally loved Severus choosing to turn into an illusion of his former self! Sirius must have almost had a fit before he realised he was there to help him, I really hope that Sirius is now properly aware of how mean he was and wont relapse into being that person ever again :)
Title: Of Bonfires and Bullies 04 Aug 2012 9:59 pm
Reviewer: lirio de amor (Signed) [Report This]
    Great chapter!
Title: Of Bonfires and Bullies 04 Aug 2012 1:52 pm
Reviewer: Severus Draconis Potter (Signed) [Report This]
    Ooh totally sweet..I loved it
Title: Two Talented Brothers 03 Aug 2012 9:22 am
Reviewer: hpfanficfan (Signed) [Report This]
    Haha, it's so like Harry to get flustered at that kind of question. I bet Ginny could handle it just fine. Hehe.

    More surprises? Wow, im still in shock from the last one lol.
Title: Two Talented Brothers 03 Aug 2012 8:33 am
Reviewer: hpfanficfan (Signed) [Report This]
    A terrific chapter! You are on a roll!

    I really like the scene where Harry accidentally his Sevy. I think strengthens their relationship as Severus realizes that Harry would never hit him on purpose, not like that.

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Title: Two Talented Brothers 03 Aug 2012 2:54 am
Reviewer: bridgeportfox (Signed) [Report This]
    What a fun chapter! From Poppy's touching and informative conversation about Albus Dumbledore and Severus to the hilarious discussion about sex while Harry desparately backpedaled, it was a delight. I'm glad that Alby is developing his own unique talents and happy to hear that Ginny is expecting. It balanced beautifully.

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