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Title: Two Talented Brothers 02 Aug 2012 4:44 pm
Reviewer: crazychick84 (Signed) [Report This]
    Lol the joys of explaining things to children! :)
Title: Two Talented Brothers 02 Aug 2012 6:59 am
Reviewer: lirio de amor (Signed) [Report This]
    "Uh huh. I need to be quiet so you can think, and you take a long time, because you're a man, and men take forever to figure things out."
    This was the best line ever! Lol! I love that Alby can talk to animals. That's awesome. Can't wait for the next chapter. Great job!
Title: Great Need, Great Power 31 Jul 2012 11:01 am
Reviewer: crazychick84 (Signed) [Report This]
    Ahh so glad they found them, love the patronus idea, how exciting to have a new baby on the way! :)
Title: Great Need, Great Power 31 Jul 2012 5:57 am
Reviewer: bridgeportfox (Signed) [Report This]
    I liked the idea of Sev calling up his Patronus even if it ended up draining him. The magical necklace sounds interesting and I'm looking forward to finding out what its powers are.
Title: Great Need, Great Power 30 Jul 2012 9:17 am
Reviewer: hpfanficfan (Signed) [Report This]
    O.O O M G!!!

    Speechless

    Author's Response: Really? Wow! Hope you like the next chapter I just put up. You could end up laughing.
Title: Great Need, Great Power 30 Jul 2012 8:50 am
Reviewer: lirio de amor (Signed) [Report This]
    Great chapter! I think this is one of my favorites so far! I loved Alby and Sevvy trying to figure out how to get out of the tunnel... Poor lads. But they held it all together! Again, great job!
Title: Great Need, Great Power 30 Jul 2012 8:34 am
Reviewer: JWOHPfan (Signed) [Report This]
    Pregnant? Really? Not sure if that is a good or bad thing at the moment, don't they have enough on their plates right now? Guess I'll have to wait and see how you handle this. Can't wait!
Title: Great Need, Great Power 30 Jul 2012 8:33 am
Reviewer: JWOHPfan (Signed) [Report This]
    Pregnant? Really? Not sure if that is a good or bad thing at the moment, don't they have enough on their plates right now? Guess I'll have to wait and see how you handle this. Can't wait!

    Author's Response: They sort of do, but then again, sometimes you don't always get to plan for a baby, I should know because my mom was told she couldn't have any more kids after my brother.  Next thing you know, she was pregnant with me.  So they're going to have a second child and hopefully they'll handle it okay. 
Title: A Very Potter Vacation 29 Jul 2012 2:05 pm
Reviewer: crazychick84 (Signed) [Report This]
    Lol typical that they would find trouble eventually! Though Alby definately seems more likely to lead them into trouble just like his dad! :)
Title: A Very Potter Vacation 29 Jul 2012 1:22 am
Reviewer: bridgeportfox (Signed) [Report This]
    I wish I were on vacation with the Potters since it sounds like so much fun. The interactions between Alby and Sev are really good. I also like the way Sev seems to go between behaving like the child he is now and the adult that he used to be. I'm looking forward to finding out how the boys escape and what adventures the tunnel will hold.

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