The bonding moments between Sev and Alby and Sev and Harry were good. I liked the part with Sev having the house elf fetching clean underpants for his younger brother. Harry and Sev's moment was so nice. It probably made Harry and Ginny's day to hear that Sev missed them as much as they missed him. I think the Lupins should join the Potters at the beach. Sirius and the beach suggest lots of opportunities for trouble and adventures.
Great chapter! I am so glad that Severus is bonding with his family. I think they will have loads of fun at the seashore.... And having the lupins down for a day or so would probably be fun for the boys. Great job:)
Wonderful chapter! Loved the cuddle and everything else, for that matter.
Thanks for the update. V.
I really enjoyed this chapter so much! Especially the cuddly moment between Harry and Severus. And the ending made me giggle. Can't wait for more!
this was so very sweet! I loved the cute moments with Sev and Harry...and I really love the sexy moment with Harry and Ginny
Aww poor Sev! Its fantastic that he is so attached to Harry and Ginny :)
What a fun chapter! I really enjoyed reading it! :)
I enjoyed the incidents with the peacock. He is certainly well-named. Severus is acting more and more like a 5-year-old. I'm glad that he will finally have a happy childhood with people who love him.
That was brilliant. I love how Severus is missing Harry and Ginny
Great chapter! Can't wait to read the next one:)
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