| Title: (Chapter 44) June 12-June 14
| 20 Oct 2022 10:03 pm
|
| Reviewer: cavehack (Signed)
| [Report This]
|
Oh my goodness. This was beautiful, surreal, and intensely moving. Thank you so much.
This was incredibly moving. I’ve read this scene many times, in many different ways. But this brought tears to my eyes and took my breath away at the poignancy of it all. Bravo.
| Title: (Chapter 42) June 4 - June 8
| 20 Oct 2022 9:29 pm
|
| Reviewer: cavehack (Signed)
| [Report This]
|
The observation of the black and white of Dumbledore’s hands was a profound one. I love your writing. It is moving, insightful, and humorous.
| Title: (Chapter 41) May 29 - June 1
| 20 Oct 2022 5:54 pm
|
| Reviewer: cavehack (Signed)
| [Report This]
|
I like this explanation for why Dumbledore took Harry on such a dangerous excursion.
I love the desire to know the details in this chapter. Very nicely done.
Thanks for another compelling and insightful chapter.
These are powerful reflections. I’ll have to go back and read the end to this story once more to truly appreciate how far Harry and Severus have come:
Great reflection on parenthood, and I always enjoy the humor you infuse into each chapter.
I love the words written on outside of the letters. Perfection.
| Title: May 1 – May 7 (Chapter 35)
| 19 Oct 2022 9:07 pm
|
| Reviewer: cavehack (Signed)
| [Report This]
|
That last line was amazing.
|