Doggone it all! The ending of this chapter made me get teary-eyed. Really it did!
First I was a bit choked up when Harry heared from Snape that Draco really did mean to hurt him and wasn't his friend. Then I started to chuckle a bit at the image of Harry playing duck and cover in Potions class.
Then the chuckle quickly turned to stinging eyes as Harry rambled on some more about his new family as he drifted back to sleep, safe in Snape's care.
Although there was small typo in this chapter when Harry is sniffling at the thought of being hurt by Draco. Snape: [He puts an hour around Harry's shoulders...]
One of the best lines I've read in ages - 'Minerva, I have a proposition for you. Give me the Weasley twins and I'll let you have Draco Malfoy. I wonder what his father would say about that!'
Thanks for the great laugh!!
"I don't wanna be a shrimp, I wanna be a big bat like you. You think I can be?" evoked an emotional response in me. Not almost, it did.
Wow. What an interesting change of pace. This should make for a very different read, and I like different.
"Just a prediction..." huh? *chuckles* I think that for someone who doesn't usually like Divination, Snape's prediction will prove to be quite prophetic. :-D
Thanks for sharing your tale with us.
Ahhhh, that was sweet. :)
I really like your story.
Aww this so cute! LOVING THIS!! Great story! :)
Hugs and Love,
Vanime
Howl!! LOL Harry as Snape's pet bat! Aww too cute! I really hope that Hermione's family gets sorted out soon for Professor Snape - is she brainy in this story like she was in the books? You don't say...
Looking forward to the next episode! :)
Hugs and Love,
Vanime
| Title: First Meetings
| 05 Nov 2011 12:29 am
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| Reviewer: Rye (Signed)
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Yay!!! Please update soon! I like how Harry is innocent, kind of like a little kid at times, but he still shows flashes of genius at times.
| Title: First Meetings
| 03 Nov 2011 11:38 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Loved Harry but a trial in the classroom! I'm sure others have mentioned this but Morag is a Scotish girl's name not a boy you had me a bit confused there! Thnk you for the story I look forward to the next part
Author's Response: Re: Morag - Fixing!
Wow, I love this. I was skeptical about the interview format at first, but I ended up loving. I really can't wait to see where this goes!
Author's Response: Hey, me too! I've never tried writing something in this format before, but I think it's working out!
LOL! I loved Snape's notes on the students - just pricless and I really hope the Dursley's get what's coming to them!
Hugs and Love,
Vanime
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