Potions and Snitches
Snape and Harry Gen Fanfiction Archive

Title: Chapter 1 22 Apr 2013 9:01 am
Reviewer: HC (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Whilst the idea behind the story is a good one, it could have been executed much better. I feel that things move too predictably, almost as if they're the fantasies of a child.

    I would have liked it to have been longer, to see the moment Snape realised something was wrong with Harry's home life.

    Also, I do not believe that Harry, as an 11 year old boy, would hold Snape's hand, no matter how scared he might be. He is too unused to touch, and would likely be too worried about classmates seeing him reaching out for comfort.

    Author's Response: Thank you very much for your review! 
Title: Chapter 1 05 Feb 2013 1:03 am
Reviewer: kspence (Signed) [Report This]
    Excellent story.

    Author's Response: Thank you!
Title: Chapter 1 31 Dec 2012 10:54 pm
Reviewer: jeff (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Forgot to rate this story
Title: Chapter 1 31 Dec 2012 10:53 pm
Reviewer: Jeff (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Hope to see more of this story and see where it heads

    Author's Response:

    *laughs*

     

     I'll be returning to it in the near future. Thanks for the review! 

Title: Chapter 1 13 Dec 2012 5:58 am
Reviewer: Zaiferz (Anonymous) [Report This]
    ...want...more...please

    Author's Response: Working on it!  Thanks for the review!
Title: Chapter 1 06 Sep 2012 2:55 am
Reviewer: Ann Jinn (Signed) [Report This]
    You did do a good job with Dumbledore, and he wasn't physically there. It always bothered me in the originals how he overlooked all the abuse.

    Author's Response: Totally agree. Thank you for the review!
Title: Chapter 1 30 Jun 2012 11:09 pm
Reviewer: Phoenix1592 (Signed) [Report This]
    it would seem that Minerva was compelled to to ignore the condition of her lions returns to school in, especially Henry's

    with Lily's will Gringotts won't prevent Severus from taking Legal custody of Henry

    Author's Response: It does seem like it, doesn't it.  You'll have to wait to see the details.
Title: Chapter 1 23 May 2012 4:12 pm
Reviewer: graynavarre (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh, Dumbledore - you are going down.

    Author's Response:

    I plead the 5th and refuse to incriminate myself or any of my....

    *Sudden coughing noise and author looks over at the lawyers*

    As i was saying I refuse to incriminate myself or any of JK Rowlings characters. 

    *smiles sweetly*

    Thanks for the review!

    PS- Sorry, I couldn't resist. ;<D

Title: Chapter 1 11 Apr 2012 1:58 am
Reviewer: garfield090684 (Signed) [Report This]
    Wow! This was an unbelievably wonderful story! I love how you have captures the character of Madam Pomfrey and the idea of Minerva McGonagall being under a spell was AMAZING! Did the headmaster care so much for his cause and so little for Harry that he would do anything just to win! I loved this piece! Write on!

    Author's Response:

    I see you managed to get past the security code now.  

     

    *smiles*

     

    Thank you.  I hopefully will be writing more soon. 

Title: Chapter 1 09 Mar 2012 5:45 pm
Reviewer: Lady Destiny (Signed) [Report This]
    This was well-written, I hope you'll keep on writing!

    Author's Response: Planning on it!  Thanks for the review. ;<D

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