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Title: Chapter 16 12 Jun 2012 11:45 pm
Reviewer: Dixie Darlin (Signed) [Report This]
    "And you shall, right after she’s transfigured, poisoned, charmed, and entangled in Devil's snare,"

    ROFL, I can just see Umbridge once they're all done with her! There may not be much left for Dumbledore to do! :)

    Author's Response: I know right....she'll be all twitchy and everything  lol
Title: Chapter 16 12 Jun 2012 11:31 pm
Reviewer: Baghi (Signed) [Report This]
    Uhm...what happened to Harry having to go? Even if he got the fright of his life, his bladder should still be full and make itself known after the danger had passed. Still, I love your stories. And what d'you mean, not a happy story? If it is one where Harry ends up finding a father in Severus, then it is a happy story! :). You pay no attention to the flamers. You are a wonderful artist, and my only critique is some of your punctuation is off, and that is only a quirk of mine after having taken two semesters of Composition and one semester of Creative Writing. Kudos on the great chapters, and more please :)

    Author's Response:

    He still has to go...Adrenaline and such...though I wasnt aware I hadnt included it in this chapter. Its in the next one, I had to have a mini scene with them picking out the trees..lol..

    well its happy in the end..but some people want the happy now..thats not how it works lol Thanks though.

    Yea, I always seemed to miss things even if I double check the storie for errors. Anyways I'm glad you like it.

Title: Chapter 16 12 Jun 2012 3:29 pm
Reviewer: Nightshade sydneylover150 (Signed) [Report This]
    How in the world did he get by Lupin, Tonks, and Severus? I cannot wait to see the tree being decorated! Very cute parts with Harry and Severus. I think it is time to chain Sirius somewhere and snap his wand.

    Poor Harry!

    Author's Response:

    They ate lunch during lunch hour..I was going for alot of people in one place...really easy for someone to slip pass Severus and Tonks...I would think that Sirius knows how to mask his scent and therefore throw off Moony.

    Harry would never allow tht, he loves Sirius...but yes I agree..

Title: Chapter 16 12 Jun 2012 1:57 pm
Reviewer: mworth1019 (Signed) [Report This]
    good job... I love Sirius, but not here...so you are doing well

    Author's Response: Trust me..I love Padfoot as well..but not here...thanks so much :)
Title: Chapter 15 01 Jun 2012 4:32 am
Reviewer: cckeimig (Signed) [Report This]
    There, all caught up! So much for a one-shot, two+shot, 4-5 chapter, etc., eh? I'm glad! ;-)

    Author's Response: I know right, I was kidding myself lol...Sev and Harry had a mind of their own I'm glad you're enjoying it though.
Title: Chapter 15 31 May 2012 12:43 pm
Reviewer: HeartStar (Signed) [Report This]
    very good sev will get her in his own alibied way *S*

    Author's Response: Lol yes he will
Title: Chapter 15 31 May 2012 12:43 pm
Reviewer: HeartStar (Signed) [Report This]
    very good sev will get her in his own alibied way *S*
Title: Chapter 15 31 May 2012 2:52 am
Reviewer: bridgeportfox (Signed) [Report This]
    The scenes of Severus caring for the sick Harry were nicely done. They have come a long way in their relationship. It sounds like there won't be enough of Umbridge to pick up with a fork and a spoon when everyone is done with her. Looking forward to that chapter.
Title: Chapter 15 31 May 2012 2:07 am
Reviewer: Vanime (Signed) [Report This]
    I like where you are taking this. Really can't wait to see what Albus and Minerva will do to Umbridge. :)

    Poor Harry, wonder how he'll react when Snape tells him about what he really went to see Dumbledore about. Hopefully, it's all good! :)

    Hugs and Love,
    Vanime
Title: Chapter 15 30 May 2012 10:11 pm
Reviewer: Lady Destiny (Signed) [Report This]
    Loved the bonding moments between Harry and Severus as well as Ron and Harry. Especially that last little part.

    Just a correction: "We have settled that have we not, I merely just need to ask Albus a question on his new grading scale"-That sentence is a comma splice.

    Author's Response:

    Yea it was cute..

     Thanks for that, its all corrected now.


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