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Title: Follow the spiders 07 Sep 2015 7:38 pm
Reviewer: Whittybear (Signed) [Report This]
    I'm sorry...I've actually enjoyed reading this story up until this point, but a huge portion of this chapter is taken word-for-word from another story on fanfiction with no credit to the author. I know this is a few years old and you may not see it, but I feel the need to point this out. If there is an explanation for this, then please put a disclaimer, but I don't think you are the same person as your writing style is totally different.
Title: Going Home 07 Sep 2015 7:30 pm
Reviewer: Emma (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I'm sorry...I've actually enjoyed reading this story up until this point, but a huge portion of this chapter is taken word-for-word from another story on fanfiction with no credit to the author. I know this is a few years old and you may not see it, but I feel the need to point this out. If there is an explanation for this, then please put a disclaimer, but I don't think you are the same person as your writing style is totally different.
Title: Snape's detention 14 Feb 2014 6:41 pm
Reviewer: Kyoko (Signed) [Report This]
    I really< don't think Snape would say "Come in, Harry." He would say "Potter", he never calls him Harry.

    Also I have the feeling that it is a bit rushed...
Title: The Flying Car 28 Apr 2012 2:49 am
Reviewer: bridgeportfox (Signed) [Report This]
    I like the idea of Snape with pets. I imagine when Molly finds out about the car incident, Rona and Harry will be in real trouble. Molly doesn't take any guff from the kids.

    Author's Response: that's very true thank you for your review :)
Title: Going Home 14 Apr 2012 4:17 am
Reviewer: Nightshade sydneylover150 (Signed) [Report This]
    I want to smack Dumbles there. Why in the world would he tell Harry that? He deserves to be thrown to the wolves!

    More please!

    Author's Response: I believe that Dumbledore is upset about the fact that his protection wards need to be changed and that Harry will be going to a home where his magic could be nurtured in a way in which Dumbledore may or may not approve (in other words he is losing power over Harry and he is not happy about it). Snape of course has no idea that Dumbledore is doing any of this and is doing what comes naturally to him. Looking after his family. Thanks for the great review and I'm glad I was able to elicit such emotion in someone reading my work! :) Write on!
Title: Going Home 13 Apr 2012 3:07 pm
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Aw, I love the ending!!!

    I'm glad that Snape is taking Harry home with him for the summer.

    Can't wait to see what the summer holds for father and son. Good job! Good chapie.

    Looking forward to the next one! :)

    Author's Response: Thank you for your wonderful review. I've actually been wondering whether or not to end the piece there but I will wait and see where my muse chooses to take me.
Title: With a little help from my friends 10 Apr 2012 4:05 am
Reviewer: Nightshade sydneylover150 (Signed) [Report This]
    And Harry finds himself in big trouble.....

    Author's Response: Thank you so much for reviewing my story! I read your stories too and think that they are really really good. But when trying to send a review to tell you so I can't because I can't verify it with that worded box thing at the botom, it doesn't show up on my computer. But I wanted to tell you how much I truely appreciate the reviews and how it helps encourage me to want to write more. Thanks :) Write on!
Title: With a little help from my friends 10 Apr 2012 4:00 am
Reviewer: Nightshade sydneylover150 (Signed) [Report This]
    And Harry finds himself in big trouble.....

    Author's Response: thank you for the review :)
Title: With a little help from my friends 09 Apr 2012 7:29 pm
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh, Harry and Ron are so dead! I wouldn't want to be in THEIR shoes. Harry always wanted a father, but he must be wishing now that he didn't have one almost! LOL

    You write fast garfield. Fourteen chapters already. Good job.

    Author's Response: That's what a week of sheer boredom can do to a person. LOL! Thank you for reviewing my work. Write on!
Title: The Flying Car 09 Apr 2012 6:22 am
Reviewer: Nightshade sydneylover150 (Signed) [Report This]
    Maybe he is... just not the one Severus thinks he is like.

    Author's Response: Not sure what you meant by writing this. Would you mind elaborating? Thanks for the review :)

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