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Title: Chapter 17: Emotional Turmoil 29 May 2012 3:00 am
Reviewer: Mervoparkite (Signed) [Report This]
    Yep, that helps!
    great job.

    V.

    Author's Response: tHANKS
Title: Chapter 17: Emotional Turmoil 29 May 2012 1:27 am
Reviewer: mworth1019 (Signed) [Report This]
    wow!

    Author's Response: That better be a good wow :)
Title: Chapter 17: Emotional Turmoil 29 May 2012 12:46 am
Reviewer: Lady Destiny (Signed) [Report This]
    Looks like Harry's actions have caused a significant toll on everyone...I almost feel bad for Draco and Ron and all them...if they didn't deserve it.
Title: Chapter 17: Emotional Turmoil 28 May 2012 10:50 pm
Reviewer: HeartStar (Signed) [Report This]
    SO SAD BUT GOOD MORE PLEASE WHEN YOU CAN

    Author's Response: I WILL DONT WORRY :)
Title: Chapter 17: Emotional Turmoil 28 May 2012 4:51 pm
Reviewer: Mervoparkite (Signed) [Report This]
    Very well writen--thanks for sharing.

    One note--it would make it easier to read if there were some sort of breaks between POV's took me a moment to catch up to each jump.

    Have a good holiday!
    V.

    Author's Response:

    glad you liked it and Thanks.

    I put little markers that tells you for different point of views..i hope that helps

    you as well, hope its great.

Title: Chapter 17: Emotional Turmoil 28 May 2012 3:35 pm
Reviewer: slytherensangel26 (Signed) [Report This]
    Good Chapter!

    Author's Response: Thanks so much
Title: Chapter 17: Emotional Turmoil 28 May 2012 2:36 pm
Reviewer: cckeimig (Signed) [Report This]
    There, I've caught up with you.
    Pretty intense, for sure. I'm interested to see where you're going with this.

    Author's Response:

    Yea this chapter was loaded...but its just the tip of the ice berg...Draco 's breakdown because he is the only student who knows Harry is 'dead' having witnessed...its going to be interesting to see how he copes along with everyone else.. I wasnt sure I put it where you could litterally feel their emotions but I take it you can. I'm glad you like it, and caught up. I'm still trying to catch up to my reviews lol.

     Thanks



    Author's Response:

    Yea this chapter was loaded...but its just the tip of the ice berg...Draco 's breakdown because he is the only student who knows Harry is 'dead' having witnessed...its going to be interesting to see how he copes along with everyone else.. I wasnt sure I put it where you could litterally feel their emotions but I take it you can. I'm glad you like it, and caught up. I'm still trying to catch up to my reviews lol.

     Thanks

Title: Chapter 16: And so it Begins 27 May 2012 11:12 pm
Reviewer: Nightshade sydneylover150 (Signed) [Report This]
    *looks at Harry*

    If Sirius really cares for you than he'll care for you no matter what you look like.

    *Looks at the author*

    And does he think he is going to get to tell Sirius? And is he going to be able to?

    Author's Response:

    Lol..Your right Sirius wont care that his best friend's son looks like his school boy rival...right? lol

    I'm mean to Sirius in my other story...I cant do that in this one...I will say yes..Sirius is gonna find out..and that is all I can say

Title: Chapter 16: And so it Begins 27 May 2012 8:55 pm
Reviewer: Lady Destiny (Signed) [Report This]
    I really hope that Harry will get a chance to tell Sirius about this whole plan. Poor Snuffles deserves to know! Update soon!

    Author's Response: Trust me...finding out Harry is dead would kill him
Title: Chapter 16: And so it Begins 27 May 2012 7:56 pm
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh, I"m enjoying this story. You've dealt with a very sensitive issue with tact and careful though. Good job.

    I can't wait to see where Harry gets sorted this time. Would be interesting if it was Slytherin, so that Snape can keep an eye on him.

    Looking forward to the next chapter.

    Author's Response:

    I'm so glad you are, and thanks so much

    I'm a Slytherin Harry fan...so there wont be any surprise(except for Sev) that he is going into Snape's house..lol


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