Great chapter. I liked how you showed the relationships between Harry, Ron and Sam. Very believable. The birthday stuff was great, especially since Harry wasn't expecting any of it.
yay!!!! you updated!!!! i love you so much!!!! you are now one of my most favorite people in the world!!!! :)
yay!!!! you updated!!!! i love you so much!!!! you are now one of my most favorite people in the world!!!! :)
| Title: Preparations
| 11 Mar 2014 7:38 am
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| Reviewer: Loki'd (Anonymous)
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This was a wonderful story! But sad to say this is where I leave you. Nothing against your writing, I just really don't like Ginny. So I'm off to explore the rest of your work.
Author's Response: Sorry to hear that. Most of my stories where Harry is dating, he ends up with Ginny (or in one of my stories Draco ends up with Ginny). It's really too bad that you've decided to leave because aside from the wedding chapter, we really don't see too much of Ginny.
| Title: Preparations
| 11 Mar 2014 1:43 am
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| Reviewer: Kendra Dhyanna (Anonymous)
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Oww!!!
I love you Ron,
he is so perfect, so cute!!!
Hermoso capítulo, y maravillosa historia, espero que la puedas continuar pronto
I can't really explain why Joanna irritates me sometimes. I think it's because I felt that she didn't see Harry for Harry at times, and her judgement was clouded. But it's a good irritation... It makes her more realistic. I do like her, a lot. I hope eventually that she is a mother figure to Harry. We always see Severus as the father figure to Harry, but we rarely see Harry get a mother... And he so deserves one. In fact, if Joanna was to irritate Harry with her mothering more, I would love her more, haha. Not that I don't love Severus as a father figure... Obviously I do... Now I'm just babbling....sorry! I love this story, btw.... I think I love all your stories.:)
I'm glad that Harry had such a good day. He needed one. Now the wedding should be coming up. I'm looking forward to the wedding chapter.
yay for update.. Cute chapter
Great chapter! I loved the fluffiness of this chapter. Every once in a while it's nice to see a chapter that isn't all angst. Lol. I also really like that there is a mom figure in this story, though there have been moments when she has irritated me lol. Overall though, I like her. And Sam. For OCs, they're really well written, not Mary Sues at all, and I like that. Great job!
Author's Response: Thanks, I don't like writing mary sues. Can you tell me any of the ways Jo has been annyoing? I'm trying to have her be realistic and loving lol. Mom's can be annyoing somtiems, I'm sure I annoy my child.
Excellent story! I'm thoroughly enjoying it. I especially loved the Ron vs Sam thing and how Harry isn't replacing Ron with Sam. Very nice work!
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