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Title: Come Home, Hermione 05 Jul 2013 7:25 am
Reviewer: Ivycloak (Signed) [Report This]
    Severus with his little speeches was very funny! I just have one question: this chapter seems to wrap up the entire story, and yet you said nothing about it being the end...? I am hoping that this means that there will be more?

    Author's Response: It does wrap things up a fair bit, yes, but there are still so many loose ends so no ... this isn't the end. Probably that will come in two to three chapters. Thanks for the review!
Title: Come Home, Hermione 05 Jul 2013 6:53 am
Reviewer: Outlawgal (Signed) [Report This]
    LOL...sorry im laughing to hard. I could just picture Severus running after Hermione in his night clothes waving a book and screaming "Your My Anne" Its just a funny picture in my head. But yeah she is staying.
    Next is Harry's birthday party.

    Author's Response: Haha great to hear you thought it was funny. I intended it to be a little comical in spots so i'm glad you liked it l. Thanks for reviewing. 
Title: Come Home, Hermione 05 Jul 2013 2:47 am
Reviewer: bridgeportfox (Signed) [Report This]
    Poor Severus. He really was stumbling there for a bit. He clearly needed his coffee to help bolster him after the long night. I especially enjoyed Hermione's thoughts at the start of the chapter. The sentence about not feeling winning like Anne just tired and bookish like Hermione struck a cord. Sometimes it would be nice to be as wonderful and lucky as the characters in books. Severus' dream made me laugh. One of those incredibly weird dreams that make sense while you have them but on waking up, you wonder where that came from. Anyway, this is a long review for an enjoyable chapter. Thanks for such a good story.

    Author's Response: Wow, thanks for the lengthy review! I love those ... Haha, great to hear you liked Severus' dream. I thought it would at least spawn a chuckle or two. I am very glad to hear that you enjoyed Hermione's little comment. I think that is a statement true for everyone, at some point. Cheers!
Title: The Little Things 29 Jun 2013 11:30 pm
Reviewer: Ivycloak (Signed) [Report This]
    I liked the way you ended with this chapter, with Severus's thoughts on the little things. And I wholeheartedly agree with his opinion.

    Author's Response: Hey, Ivycloak! It is fantastic to hear you enjoyed hearing Severus' thoughts and opinions on the little things. Thanks for sharing yours!
Title: The Little Things 29 Jun 2013 12:13 am
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Thank you very moving and very well handled thank you

    Author's Response: Great to hear you enjoyed it! Thanks for reviewing. :)
Title: The Little Things 28 Jun 2013 6:46 pm
Reviewer: missny1 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    This chapter was wonderful. The memory was horrible, but the ending, those "small acts of love" were such a heartwarming way to end a difficult and depressing situation.

    Author's Response: I figured I needed a pretty good ending to keep this chapter from being so darned depressing, so I am glad you liked the small acts of love thing. Thanks so much for taking the time to review!
Title: The Little Things 28 Jun 2013 2:34 am
Reviewer: bridgeportfox (Signed) [Report This]
    I loved this chapter. Harry's memory was so sad. It must have really hit Snape since he took care of a Harry that was close to that age. It sounds like Albus has something in mind for the Dursleys. I wonder if he will include Snape or not? I especially liked the end about small acts of love. Very true.

    Author's Response: Great to hear from you, bridgeportfox! Yeah, I imagine it must have been hard for Severus. And yeah, Albus does seem a little nefarious, doesn't he? I suppose time will tell what he has planned. Great to hear you liked the ending too! Thanks for reviewing!
Title: The Little Things 28 Jun 2013 12:14 am
Reviewer: tabbycat (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Yay! Great update. love the stars. :) Thanks, tabbycatx

    Author's Response: Thanks tabbycat! I thought the stars were fun too. ;)
Title: The Little Things 27 Jun 2013 9:50 pm
Reviewer: Outlawgal (Signed) [Report This]
    lol I liked Harrys version of the song "Like a dia- day ... sparkle in the sky ..." but it was sad when he added like Mummy and Daddy.
    To bad they won't let Severus kill them but I agree that he just got Harry and Harry just got him and why break that.
    The last sentence is so true. The little things no matter how small will always add up to something bigger.

    Author's Response: Yeah, I thought that a three year old would have trouble pronouncing diamond. Glad you liked that! I wasn't sure if I'd keep the Mummy and Daddy thing though, because it sounded a little cheesy to me at times, but I decided to keep it anyway. True indeed. Thanks so much for reviewing!
Title: The Little Things 27 Jun 2013 9:31 pm
Reviewer: rosina (Signed) [Report This]
    That was such a good memory to choose to showcase both Harry's and the Dursleys' character.This chapter is one of my favourite of the whole story so imagine a couple of virtual stars to add to the 10 rating.

    Author's Response: Wow, thank you so much rosina! I am so glad to hear this is one of your favourite chapters. It was a tricky one to write, so to hear that you enjoyed it so much is just great. I ruminated on which particular memory for a long time before writing. Cheers!

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