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Reviews For Prisoners
Title: The Little Things 27 Jun 2013 7:30 pm
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh, those horrible people.

    I can't believe how cruel they were to such a small boy. How awful. Hope that life with Severus will bring both the happiness that they deserve.

    Now, I hope that Hermione will complete this little family. :)

    Author's Response: Yeah, it made me cringe while writing it, but I figured the memory couldn't be pretty, exactly. Hmm, yes, Hermione would make a nice addition! Thanks so much for reviewing, Pandora!
Title: The Little Things 27 Jun 2013 4:15 pm
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I have been in love with this story from day one. This chapter (and a few others) made me misty eyed.
    Excellent!

    Author's Response: Wow, great to hear! I am glad you have enjoyed Prisoners, and that it has touched you emotionally. Thanks so much for leaving a review!
Title: The Little Things 27 Jun 2013 2:26 pm
Reviewer: cara-tanaka (Signed) [Report This]
    Looking forward to more

    Author's Response: Good to hear from you!
Title: The Little Things 27 Jun 2013 12:37 pm
Reviewer: l. (Anonymous) [Report This]
    good luck :) and do not make us wait long

    Author's Response: Thanks! Don't worry, I won't take too long. Cheers!
Title: The Little Things 27 Jun 2013 11:39 am
Reviewer: snapefan_17 (Signed) [Report This]
    excellent this is one of my fave stories.

    incredible writting too

    hmm i wonder what Molly's reaction will be and the rest of the order? *grins*

    Author's Response: Thanks so much for the review snapefan 17! Great to hear you are enjoying it. Hmm ... Molly's reaction ... yeah, that would be interesting!
Title: Fallen Fortresses 23 Jun 2013 12:43 am
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Must have been hard to write but a splendid job thank you

    Author's Response: Oh gosh was it ever! Thanks so much for the review Fmh, and I am glad that you thought it turned out well! Cheers! ;)
Title: Fallen Fortresses 22 Jun 2013 2:35 am
Reviewer: CeeCeeMee (Signed) [Report This]
    I really liked how apprehensive Harry was that Severus might have changed his mind and he'd be sent back to hos Aunt's house. You portrayed his insecurity quite well. I also liked that he talked himself out of it before it could completely overwhelm him. Nicely done.

    Sorry, I no longer believe that you are sorry for the cliffhanger. You're getting to good at them to be truly sorry. :-P *giggles*

    Author's Response: I am glad that you enjoyed Harry's thoughts on the matter of his living arrangements. That was tricky to write, so it is great to hear some feedback! I wanted to show the two sides of him, the one that is still afraid, and the one that wants to trust. I think everyone has those two sides within them. Haha ... and yeah, I'm not that sorry ... but I am a little, really! But just a little. Giggle ... Thanks for reviewing! ;)
Title: Fallen Fortresses 22 Jun 2013 12:41 am
Reviewer: bridgeportfox (Signed) [Report This]
    I'm glad that Harry was able to overcome his fears and trusted Snape. It sounds like they need each other at this point. I look forward to seeing which memory Harry selected for them to view.

    Author's Response: I look forward to posting that part! Thanks so much for reviewing!
Title: Fallen Fortresses 21 Jun 2013 1:44 pm
Reviewer: Ann (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Hi Whitetail,

    I’m not a registered user but I’m here every Thursday for your stories, been here for 1612 and 1613, too. Just wanted to say a bit belated thank you for all the brilliant stories you gave us. I love how you can keep the characters three dimensional while creating a whole other milieu around them. You’re extremely talented, but hey, you probably know that. :) Keep up the good work!

    Ann, a former lurker

    Author's Response: Hi Ann! Wow, thank you so very much for  finally taking the time to review! I am so glad you have enjoyed 1612, 1613 and Prisoners! It is wonderful to hear that you are enjoying the characters. Aww, thanks for the compliment. *blushes*. Cheers!
Title: Fallen Fortresses 21 Jun 2013 1:23 pm
Reviewer: snapefan_17 (Signed) [Report This]
    excellent as always cant wait for next week's chapter :)

    awww it was sweet how poor sev told harry that he wanted him to stay, i wonder if he'll be able to get the same courageto ask hermione to stay too

    Author's Response: Great to hear you liked Severus' confession! Yes, let us hope he finds some Gryffindor courage when it comes to Hermione! Thanks for the review!

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