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Title: Fallen Fortresses 21 Jun 2013 7:36 am
Reviewer: missny1 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I love this chapter, it's not unpolished (your word), it's perfect. Harry gets to stay and the dursleys will finally get wheat's coming to them. I still miss Harry as a little boy though.

    Author's Response: Oh, goodness, glad you think it's perfect! That's the trouble when you finish writing it - all you tend to see are the holes, and it makes it hard to judge sometimes whether or not it flows well. So thank you for sharing your thoughts on it! Yeah, I'll miss Harry as a little kid too! Thanks for reviewing missny1!
Title: Fallen Fortresses 21 Jun 2013 3:38 am
Reviewer: Outlawgal (Signed) [Report This]
    woo hoo Harry excepts. Now lets see what they think of his memory. Are you going to have the memory in the next chapter?

    Author's Response: Hey Outlawgal! Yeah, I will have the memory next chapter, for sure. It should be interesting, no doubt. Thanks for reviewing!
Title: Fallen Fortresses 21 Jun 2013 3:17 am
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Omg!!! That was so worth the wait. I am glad that Severus and Dumbledore will finally see first-hand what Harry's life has been like.

    I hope that it all works out that Hermione can stay too, and they will really be a family. I'm happy, but sad for Harry too
    . Sharing these memories won't be easy.

    Well, great job as usual Whitetail, you brought tears to my eyes.

    Author's Response: I am glad that it was worth waiting for! Oh, how I agonized over this chapter ... yay writer's block! Yeah, Harry's situation is definitely a sad one ... Thanks for reviewing - great to hear it really struck a chord!
Title: Fallen Fortresses 21 Jun 2013 2:57 am
Reviewer: cara-tanaka (Signed) [Report This]
    Looking forward to more

    Author's Response: Thanks for the review!
Title: Fallen Fortresses 21 Jun 2013 2:53 am
Reviewer: o, (Anonymous) [Report This]
    OMG that's just wrong , i want next chapter!! please :)

    Author's Response: Yeah ... it was evil. I know, I know. But hey ... if you keep reading with enthusiasm, it served its purpose! Thanks for reviewing - I hope the wait isn't too horrendous!
Title: Fallen Fortresses 21 Jun 2013 2:49 am
Reviewer: Ivycloak (Signed) [Report This]
    Now you've got me really wondering what the heck that memory was! I'm also HOPING that Severus will do something about Hermione's living situation as well...But Nice chapter!

    Author's Response: Well, Sevrerus knows now that there is a good chance she wants to live there with him too, so keep hoping he has the courage! Thanks so much for the review, and sorry for all the wondering I have left you doing! ;)
Title: The Key in Hand 20 Jun 2013 3:50 pm
Reviewer: rosina (Signed) [Report This]
    Excellent. It seems the Bell Point magic will hold, and the new friendships will continue back into normal life. Dumbledore got off quite lightly though - let's hope a fair bit of his anger was directed towards himself and, busy man or not, he'll do better in the future.
Title: The Key in Hand 19 Jun 2013 10:27 pm
Reviewer: rusulka7 (Signed) [Report This]
    Im loving your snape in this, I think his development and growing awarness have been written very nicely and doesnt feel out of character. Like everyone else I'm going to feel bereft when this all finishes up! Also liking the hint that maybe he will take on Herminone too:>)

    Author's Response: Thanks so much for the feedback! It is wonderful to hear that you are enjoying Snape in this story, and that he doesn't feel that out of character. Great to hear you liked the Hermione thing too! Cheers!
Title: The Key in Hand 16 Jun 2013 5:19 am
Reviewer: Severus Draconis Potter (Signed) [Report This]
    I love deaging fics, and I'm a bit sad, because he's aged back now so the fic is coming to a close. This was a sweet ride though...

    One more thing because I'm obviously slow today. In that one part where they're talking about Hermione's patronus..Severus said: "It's the people that make a h -" I know its a word but its annoying the heck out of me that I can't think of the word so I figured I'd just ask :)

    Author's Response: Home is the word! Sorry you were stuck on that! I totally get it, when the brain is just elsewhere and then it's driving you nuts what the word, or name or thing is! Maybe I'll add another letter to make it easier.  I am glad you are enjoying the story, and I too am pretty sad that it's coming to a close. It's just been a good fic to write emotionally, you know? A good one to pour the soul into. Thanks so much for reviewing!
Title: The Key in Hand 16 Jun 2013 2:55 am
Reviewer: cara-tanaka (Signed) [Report This]
    Cannot wait for more. Update soon

    Author's Response: Great to hear from you cara-tanaka!

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