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Title: A Risk Worth Taking 06 Jun 2013 6:39 pm
Reviewer: Outlawgal (Signed) [Report This]
    grrr on the cliff hanger but it was such a AWESOME chapter so I forgive you.
    Severus got there in time to save Harry :)
    Was in really Padfoot or was it the..the..The Grim muhahahahaha
    When Harry collapsed that was scary. I kind of hope he doesn't change back but then again he probably will. Oh I don't know you have a tough choice I don't envy you.
    Just think If Hermione wasn't there and with her evil great aunt what would have happened.
    I think Harry saw padfoot and the coin disappeared for Hermione for a reason. Harry so he will admit that it wasn't his fault and for Hermione to think of happy thoughts. I am glad she thought of Bell Point.
    Now lets just hope the Dumbledore and Poppy get there quickly.

    Author's Response: Thanks for the review Outlawgal! Yeah ... tough choice ahead indeed. *frowns thoughtfully*  Well done on picking up on Hermione's emotional journey there. Yes, it was meant to show that while she is still suffering, she can now feel happy in life despite her situation. Cheers!
Title: A Risk Worth Taking 06 Jun 2013 2:34 pm
Reviewer: cara-tanaka (Signed) [Report This]
    Looking forward to more

    Author's Response:

    Thanks for the feedback!

     

Title: A Risk Worth Taking 06 Jun 2013 12:56 pm
Reviewer: snapefan_17 (Signed) [Report This]
    first of all, these cliffhangers are evil

    secondly though they are really great chapter and i particularly liked the talk between sev and harry

    hmmm is sirius truly dead or did the veil spit him out? was it even sirius who bellatrix killed or a polyjuiced order member? This could mean he might be able to have visited harry. Is the grim another wizard's animagus too and if so who?

    sorry for random questions just curious as ever

    Look forward to reading the next chapter.

    Author's Response:

    Interesting thoughts on the Padfoot matter. I am glad you liked the talk between Harry and Severus! Thanks for reviewing!

     

Title: A Risk Worth Taking 06 Jun 2013 7:36 am
Reviewer: darkorangecat (Signed) [Report This]
    The cliff hanger does work very well. I like how Severus protected Harry, and how the tree seemed to have missed them. The storm and the tree falling acted as a wonderful catalyst for Harry's heavy, swirling emotions. I'm really looking forward to reading what happens next.

    Author's Response: Thanks so much for your feedback! I am glad you enjoyed the evens that were triggered by the tree falling. Cheers!
Title: Fire in the Sky 04 Jun 2013 9:07 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Thank you despite the cliffie! Love how their relationships are developing

    Author's Response: Great to hear that you are liking the relationships Fmh! Thanks for reviewing!
Title: Fire in the Sky 04 Jun 2013 4:59 pm
Reviewer: Silver_Snake (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Hnnnggghhhh....*breathing heavily after cliffhanger* I was uber scared though the lightning was actually death eaters on brooms though but now you're scaring me with a old tree of doom *gets paper bag and breaths into it* Cheers for Snape creating some shield barrier or some kind of spontaneous save Harry device, basically you've made me incoherent with worry.

    But regardless of my fear, I still loved this chapter as always, nice insight into Harry's head and Snape really handled the situation well :3 Also thought the device you used to get Harry out of the house (hallucination?) of Padfoot's dog form was pretty realistic considering the emotional state he's in and made my heart clench for him.

    *throws hexes past you hitting the evil tree* I knew that tree was bad news ever since Harry scraped his knee from being on that swing!

    Author's Response: I did mention that the tree was rotting at some point ... so yes, bad news, haha! Ah ... the device I used to get Harry outside. Hallucination, indeed? That is the question. I am especially glad you liked that. I jumped up and down with excitement when the idea came to me, so it is good to hear it was appreciated! Thanks for reviewing! :)
Title: Fire in the Sky 03 Jun 2013 11:50 am
Reviewer: darkorangecat (Signed) [Report This]
    Awesome, heart-stopping cliffhanger that has me quite literally on the edge of my seat. Wonderful details throughout this chapter which made this chapter leap off the page; I could picture the lightning and feel the wind. I'm eager for more.

    Author's Response: Great to hear that you though the chapter was so engaging, darkorangecat! I look forward to posting the next chapter as well! Thanks for reviewing. :)
Title: Fire in the Sky 01 Jun 2013 4:38 am
Reviewer: bridgeportfox (Signed) [Report This]
    Wow. That certainly was a cliffhanger! The day sounded like a depressing one to start with - a cloudy, gray day would be harder to take for Harry and Hermione, who were both feeling down anyway. I liked the way you had the storm building and then Harry running out into the middle of it followed by Severus.It will be hard to wait until next week for the next chapter.

    Author's Response: Great to hear that you enjoyed the atmosphere, as well as Harry's rash decision.  Thanks so much for the review! 
Title: Fire in the Sky 01 Jun 2013 1:21 am
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Ohh! Please let them be OK thank you for. Updating

    Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing Fmh!
Title: Fire in the Sky 01 Jun 2013 12:09 am
Reviewer: Ivycloak (Signed) [Report This]
    Yes, terrible, horrible, evil cliffhanger! One of the worst!
    Well, while I may not want to wait for more (pout), from an analytical point of view my excitement means that this was very well done. Bravo!

    Author's Response: Thanks Ivycloak for the review! I am glad that you are so excited about the story ... even though it means rather unfortunately that it will make it harder to wait for the next chapter! It'll come next week though. Nothing worse than a story being abandoned on a cliff hanger ... I shudder to think. Now *that* is evil!

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