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Title: Photographs 10 May 2013 12:10 am
Reviewer: snapefan_17 (Signed) [Report This]
    ah makes u wonder if sev will adopt both of them at the end of summer

    v well written as per usual :)

    Author's Response: A valid speculation, for sure. Nice to hear your ideas! Thank you so much for reviewing. ;)
Title: Photographs 09 May 2013 11:50 pm
Reviewer: SnapesYukuai (Signed) [Report This]
    A truly wonderful chapter. Although I'm a "as much as possible Harry Snape interaction" fan normally, I greatly enjoyed this. You simply have a way of spotting character's chemistry be it Harry and Snape or any of the others.
    It was a nice way to bring Hermione and Severus nearer and tell tales of past times as well.
    Brilliantly done! Longing for next week and a new chap, your Melfis.

    Author's Response: Thank you for the kind words! I am glad you are enjoying the chemistry between the characters. It's not always easy, that's for sure. Thanks so much for reviewing!
Title: Photographs 09 May 2013 11:37 pm
Reviewer: Ivycloak (Signed) [Report This]
    I loved it! Hermione seems like she's now on the road to recovery, and Snape is beginning to loosen up.
    Very nicely done!

    Author's Response: Glad you liked it Ivycloak! Thanks for reviewing.
Title: Photographs 09 May 2013 11:19 pm
Reviewer: Hesperis (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Wow! This chapter was superb! Looking forward the next one! =o)

    Author's Response: Thank you! I appreciate the feedback!
Title: Photographs 09 May 2013 11:05 pm
Reviewer: cara-tanaka (Signed) [Report This]
    Looking forward to more.

    Author's Response: And more is one the way! Thanks for reviewing cara-tanaka. ;)
Title: Photographs 09 May 2013 11:04 pm
Reviewer: Pika (Anonymous) [Report This]
    This was a nice chapter but i have to say i'm upset that severus choices to talk to hermione about lily when harry barley knows anything about her. Unlike Severus and Hermione harry never got to know his parents they died when he was a baby and he was told lies for a long time till he was 11 about them and even now he knows very little about them. I think harry needs to have a talk to severus about his mom. I understand that you needed to work on hermoine's plot but i don't like how severus hasn't told harry about his mother. I feel like it would bring them closer, I just feel sorry for him. I like how even when the whole chapter is pretty much about hermione shes still in character good job!

    Author's Response: I can see where you're coming from. The way I see it though, is that Severus is still afraid to tell Harry he knew his mother, seeing as he played such a huge part in her death. He's terrified Harry will find that out, and that he will hate him for it, especially now that he and Harry have gotten close. He'll come around eventually though. Thanks for the feedback! I am glad that you thought Hermione was in character.
Title: The Evils of Baths 06 May 2013 1:43 am
Reviewer: darkorangecat (Signed) [Report This]
    I really enjoyed this chapter, from the lighthearted playing in the mud, to Harry's breakdown, and then the touching moment at the end. Simply wonderful.

    Author's Response: Thanks so much for sharing your thoughts!
Title: The Evils of Baths 05 May 2013 10:31 pm
Reviewer: Karis (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Severus is such a good "dad" and Harry is adorable. I really like Harry's reasoning at the end of this chapter as to why Severus should call him Harry instead of Potter. This story makes me so happy and I can't wait for the next chapter!

    Author's Response: It is wonderful to hear that you liked Harry's logic. I am very glad you are enjoying it Karis, and thank you for sharing your thoughts!
Title: The Evils of Baths 05 May 2013 2:51 pm
Reviewer: SnapesYukuai (Signed) [Report This]
    Wheeew, after 3 month of learning for and actually doing end of uni exams I'm finally able to review again. Anyway, your story kept me happy and waiting all those weeks, so here's the review:
    Harry playing in the mud was just plain adorable!! You described it in such a realistic detailed way that I could nearly feel it. And oh, Hermione and Severus were so cute in this chap. Poor Hermy didn't know what hit her. Severus is mellowing ever more and I like it, like it very much, because you preserve his general character no matter how much he changes.
    Loved it!! Your Melfis.

    Author's Response: Glad to hear you've finally finished up with all the craziness of exams! I feel your pain. Just got done mine a week or so ago. I am pleased to hear that you feel I have preserved Snape's character despite the changes! That was one of my biggest worries for this story, so thank you so much for commenting on that. Great to heard you liked Hermione too. Thanks for the review!
Title: The Evils of Baths 04 May 2013 1:13 am
Reviewer: Ivycloak (Signed) [Report This]
    Heartwarming ending! After that episode, I'm beginning to wonder if Snape is going to explain things to Hermione. After dealing with Harry's seemingly irrational terror of baths, I would think she deserves one!

    Author's Response: Well, she did hear what Harry had to say about getting a cold bath if he was bad. That would be a clue to his home situation. And yes, Hermione will hear about some of what has happened to Harry. Of course she deserves an explanation, but I think the best person to give it to her would be Harry. Thanks for reviewing!

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