I thought Severus' talk with Hermione was good. He would know how she feels since he lost his own parents at a young age. I also enjoyed his comments about Crookshanks. It's nice that he wasn't forgotten and popped up in the story.
Author's Response: I am glad you thought well of the talk between Severus and Hermione. And yes, Crookshanks will be present.
| Title: Hideaway
| 21 Mar 2013 11:34 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Thank you a lovely chapter and "Anne of Green Gables" a very good choice for Hermione although I'm sure she's read it!
Author's Response: I wouldn't be surprised if she has! I am glad you enjoyed the chapter!
Once again a great chapter, this one was a tear jerker with the talk between sev and hermione. PLease update soon, this is a gripping story
Author's Response: Wow, thanks so much I am glad the story is capturing your interest.
wow. This was such a good chapter. Many things happened and you gave us a lot of information. I really enjoyed this chapter. :)
Things are starting to change for the better.
Author's Response: Yes, things are improving, that is for sure. It is great to hear that you enjoyed this chapter so much!
Love it looking forward to more
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing!
Personally I'd like to see Snape get guardianship of both of them, as I think they need each other.
Author's Response: Hmm, that would be fun, wouldn't it be? Thank you for the review!
| Title: The Arrival
| 18 Mar 2013 3:08 pm
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| Reviewer: A-zla (Anonymous)
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I love this story! You characterize everybody so well. I loved how Harry managed to get Snape to colour with him, and the way you described Snape's coloring!
Author's Response: Great to hear from you! I am so glad you are enjoying the descriptions and characterizations. ;)
I had to smile at Harry telling Snape off for swearing, and at the whole colouring scene. Much more fun for Snape than the stupid, annoying sewing cards! You did a good job on showing how numb Hermione is - even an undoubtedly sweet young Harry couldn't raise much interest.
Author's Response: I am glad that you liked the colouring scene and Harry telling Severus off. Great to hear you thought that my portrayal of Hermione's emotional state good. Kind of a combonation of shock and depression. Thanks so much for your review!
| Title: The Arrival
| 15 Mar 2013 7:25 pm
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| Reviewer: my_patronus_is_a_dinosaur (Anonymous)
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I would LOVE to have a moving coloring book! How cool would that be!!!
Nicely written - I'm so sad about Hermione :(
Author's Response: Extremely cool, indeed. I too would jump at the chance for a colouring book like that! I am glad you enjoyed the writing!
| Title: The Arrival
| 15 Mar 2013 4:59 pm
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| Reviewer: Pika (Anonymous)
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D'awwwwwww Sevvy and harry coloring together SOOOO cute! I like how harry lied for sevvy. Hermione seems so sad i hope she cheers up. I wonder what these will do to Sevvy and harry's new budding friendship. And what is the letter all about?
Author's Response: Nice to hear your thoughts. As for the letter, just an ordinary 'hello' kind of letter. The text won't be revealed. The letter from Ron was merely an indication that Mrs. Weasley had been there to tuck Harry in. Thanks for reviewing!
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