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Title: Small Disasters 22 Feb 2013 4:06 am
Reviewer: Pika (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Hello i'm a big fan! I love seeing how Harry's kinda regressing slowly. First it was the lion and now it's bed-wetting. I think Severus should be nicer to Harry, the two have alot in common. I felt bad for the both of them last chapter, and we can see how it's tense right now between the two. Harry needs to show Severus that he isn't hopeless. But i have to say Dumbledore is sucking at the moment he just drop two people off in a house with little to no contact with anyone else and he doesn't even think about checking in! And the two people that are alone is a young child and a man that can't button his own shirt, i mean thats almost as bad as him droping off the savor of the wizarding world with abusive people and not caring enough to go check up on him!
    I'd love to see a relationship between harry and severus grow so they can be friends and relay on eachother incase they need help.

    Author's Response: Hey Pika! I don't believe I have heard from you yet. It is always great to hear from someone new! I am glad you are liking it. Don't worry, Severus will warm up to Harry a little. You are right that Dumbledore is being a little bit of a pighead, I suppose. He seems to have faith that Severus and Harry can manage though, as long as Poppy is there every day for a little while. But that's Dumbledore for you. Thanks for your review!
Title: Small Disasters 22 Feb 2013 3:14 am
Reviewer: Outlawgal (Signed) [Report This]
    it wasn't the disatser I was thinking might happen but it kinda makes me think that Harry is getting younger as the days go by. Cause who knows how long the Dursley's kept him in nappies and all that shit-su.

    Author's Response: Well, Harry's slight problem is sort of reflective of his mental state. With kids stress can bring on bed-wetting issues, and seeing as he's been putting himself under increasing amounts of mental strain, it is bound to happen. So, is he getting younger ... well, not physically. But he is regressing in some ways. Thank you so much for your review!
Title: Small Disasters 22 Feb 2013 3:08 am
Reviewer: Severus Draconis Potter (Signed) [Report This]
    Progress I suppose for the boys. Just when you feel like they might get better, something happens. Poor Harry, Poor Sev,

    I feel like I'm saying that a lot lol

    Author's Response: Yes, true, quite true. Little steps and setbacks! Thanks for the review!
Title: Small Disasters 22 Feb 2013 2:18 am
Reviewer: bridgeportfox (Signed) [Report This]
    Well, they are communicating but not at the same time, if that makes sense. Hopefully, they will get into rhythm where they understand each other eventually. It can't be easy when each ones body is not acting the way they are used to.

    Author's Response: I see exactly what you mean bridgeportfox. When Snape is ready to get along, Harry isn't, and vice versa.  Thank you for sharing your thoughts! :)
Title: Small Disasters 22 Feb 2013 1:46 am
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh boy. I think that Snape is definitely getting suspicious.

    I think also that these boys are going to learn to get along with each other, but onlyh after a very bumpy road ahead.

    Good job as usual. Can't wait for the next chapter.

    Author's Response: Thanks Pandora! Yeah, Snape does seem a little suspicious, doesn't he?
Title: Small Disasters 22 Feb 2013 1:20 am
Reviewer: cara-tanaka (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh dear the poor boys. Looking forward to more. Update soon

    Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing! Glad you are looking forward to more. Good news is, next chapter's already written. It just has to be edited!
Title: The Subtle Art of Shaving 20 Feb 2013 12:49 am
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Thank you a very well written chapter you handled the emotions really well with both of them. Please let lion be found!

    Author's Response: Oh the lion will show up again, no need to worry. Thank you so very much for leaving a review Fmh! I am pleased you enjoyed it.
Title: The Subtle Art of Shaving 17 Feb 2013 10:41 pm
Reviewer: SnapesYukuai (Signed) [Report This]
    Wow, although this chapter was vastly sad, I liked it very much... maybe even because of it. Only if there are scenes like this, days like this for our favourite two they can at some point step forward and understand each other. I liked Severus' raw unguarded side very much. Not only, when he broke down in the kitchen, but when he thought about Harry in the morning.
    The shaving scene was brilliant and Severus storming out of the bath looking like that was funny all other things set aside. ^, ^"
    Loved it when Harry set Snape straight and when he really comrehended Snape's situation at night in the kitchen.
    Well, enogh rambling on my part, your Melfis.

    Author's Response: I am very glad that you liked it! Thank your for the detailed review. It is always nice to hear the specifics of what a reader thinks made the chapter good.  Cheers!
Title: The Subtle Art of Shaving 16 Feb 2013 9:00 pm
Reviewer: bridgeportfox (Signed) [Report This]
    Seeing Snape crying was an eye opener for Harry. Maybe it will help him to understand Severus a bit more. Severus had his own revelation after he was so snarky to young Harry. Hopefully it will help them both relate to the other better.

    Author's Response: Yeah, let's hope so, huh? Thanks for the review bridgeportfox.
Title: The Subtle Art of Shaving 16 Feb 2013 11:24 am
Reviewer: Zireael07 (Signed) [Report This]
    I love the story. Brilliant!

    Author's Response: Glad you are enjoying it! Thanks for the review. :)

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