I love that the barriers are coming down so naturally.
I’m glad he went to the source!
This is one of my favorite chapters. I absolutely loved it. It was sweet and powerful, and simply perfect.
I loved the catch scene. It was poignant and so well done. Snape’s introspection was beautifully insightful.
I enjoyed the scene with just Severus and Hermione, and was totally taken with the scene at the end of little Harry curled up between the two of them.
I love that Snape is sensing that there’s more to Harry’s past, and that he’s actually taking action. It feels like a burden lifting, even as Harry himself remains unaware of it all. Thanks for another brilliant chapter.
I loved Snape’s conversation with Hermione, and even more so his revelations about Harry at the end.
The imagery in your story is brilliant. I absolutely loved the coloring scene - it was sweet and subtly humorous all at once.
Your writing feels like poetry sometimes - stirring and alive.
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