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Title: An Unexpected Visitor 13 Apr 2021 10:50 pm
Reviewer: Cayj (Signed) [Report This]
    I'm ecstatic severus said "guardian"..?. Ill be honest I was really worried you were leading up to some hermione/severus romantic relationship like I've see tagged all over ao3 and I hate even the idea tbh (severus snape is twice the age of harry and his friends and it's not something I like to think of him engaging in) but when he said hermione might choose him as her guardian.... Well I just took a huge sigh if relief. Aunt isobel should've gotten blown up like aunt marge, foul old lady
Title: Swimming Buddies 13 Apr 2021 5:28 pm
Reviewer: Cayj (Signed) [Report This]
    I just couldn't leave this chapter without applauding you-- that one line "you had a glass of milk too" and God knows I was picturing this adorable scrunched up little face and I just can't breathe for the adorableness! I just couldn't move forward without thanking you for that
Title: Every Day and Always 06 Feb 2021 6:24 am
Reviewer: esoteric (Signed) [Report This]
    This was so beautiful. I am so grateful to you for writing this and so very glad I happened to find it. Years later your work is still reaching new eyes and I hope you know how much good it does. It healed a little part of me.
Title: Every Day and Always 28 Jan 2021 4:04 pm
Reviewer: cavehack (Signed) [Report This]
    This is an amazing story! I love the setting of Bell Point, which creates such a beautiful, peaceful atmosphere for the story. Thanks to the gorgeous details of the setting, I almost feel like I’ve been to the little cottage and can smell the sea air. I love how natural the relationship between Snape and Harry feels by the end, and how the deaging element creates a familiarity with each other’s vulnerabilities that makes the whole story so touching. What a beautiful and wonderful story!
Title: Every Day and Always 10 Apr 2020 4:24 pm
Reviewer: BlueWater5 (Signed) [Report This]
    Wow!

    Author's Response: Thanks! 
Title: Every Day and Always 07 Dec 2018 5:03 am
Reviewer: darkorangecat (Signed) [Report This]
    Beautifully written tale with a wonderfully happy ending. :-)

    Author's Response: Thanks very much! I appreciate your comment. 
Title: Every Day and Always 04 Jul 2018 3:48 pm
Reviewer: Angela_lalala (Signed) [Report This]
    I love this. The idea is super original. Giving both of them similar but different problems and then putting them in the same space were they are required to deal with each other.


    I think you perfectly described a Snape that is injured. Annoyed, refusing others to help him, trying to just overcome the problem without help


    All the Molly and Harry interactions were just sooo sweet.


    Harry's bogart was terryfying.

    I wanted to punch Dumbledore in the face when he said that he didn't put up Protections around Hermione house.he should put up Protections around every Muggleborn home cUse they are all potential targets that can't protect themselves. Purebloods and Halfbloods have parents who can make wards but muggleborns are just left out in the open even tough they are the most vulnerable.

    It was a really original thing to also let Hermione be a part of this new family. It makes sense cause she and Harry already see themselves as siblings.

    Ron interactions with a small Harry were just sooo precious.

    The punishments for the Dursley was perfect cause it does make anyone go to Azkaban but they are gonna suffer.
Title: Every Day and Always 04 Jul 2018 3:48 pm
Reviewer: Angela_lalala (Signed) [Report This]
    I love this. The idea is super original. Giving both of them similar but different problems and then putting them in the same space were they are required to deal with each other.


    I think you perfectly described a Snape that is injured. Annoyed, refusing others to help him, trying to just overcome the problem without help


    All the Molly and Harry interactions were just sooo sweet.


    Harry's bogart was terryfying.

    I wanted to punch Dumbledore in the face when he said that he didn't put up Protections around Hermione house.he should put up Protections around every Muggleborn home cUse they are all potential targets that can't protect themselves. Purebloods and Halfbloods have parents who can make wards but muggleborns are just left out in the open even tough they are the most vulnerable.

    It was a really original thing to also let Hermione be a part of this new family. It makes sense cause she and Harry already see themselves as siblings.

    Ron interactions with a small Harry were just sooo precious.

    The punishments for the Dursley was perfect cause it does make anyone go to Azkaban but they are gonna suffer.

    Author's Response: Thanks so very much for your review! I'm so happy to hear you felt it was original. It brings me such joy when people such as yourself leave a detailed review of what they like about a story. Cheers, and thanks for reading! 
Title: A Birthday to Remember 25 Jan 2018 8:29 am
Reviewer: HermioneGirl (Signed) [Report This]
    Hagrid swimming... *Giggles*

    Author's Response: Haha, it is fun to picture, isn't it? Thanks again for your comments, HermioneGirl!
Title: Come Home, Hermione 25 Jan 2018 8:19 am
Reviewer: HermioneGirl (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh, that was a great chapter. I like the fact that you thought of a will. Most authors don't and just ignore the fact that most character's parents/guardians would have something down in writing about what should happen with their belongings and, most importantly, their child. So I would like to commend you on that.

    This chapter was super sad and sweet. I loved Severus' bumbling metaphors.

    Author's Response: I am glad that you appreciate the details like the will. I guess I've always been a practical person, and it does bother me too when those things are left out. I am so glad you thought the chapter was sweet, and enjoyed Severus' bumbling metaphors as you put it! I have always thought that Snape would be terrible at expressing his emotions properly, haha.

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