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Reviews For Reflection
Title: Reflection 27 Apr 2025 1:18 am
Reviewer: InTheBlackWaters (Signed) [Report This]

    Second person just changes the tone of the whole thing, doesn't it? This was so perfectly beautiful.

    Thankyou, thankyou, thankyou for sharing it with us!

Title: Reflection 22 Oct 2022 11:29 pm
Reviewer: cavehack (Signed) [Report This]
    This felt really raw and real, and the second person tense really brought that out. I agree that you conveyed how Harry feels so strikingly well. Thanks so much for this story.
Title: Reflection 14 Oct 2014 12:34 pm
Reviewer: atiaahmed (Signed) [Report This]
    That was deep and dark... But good and a bit tooshort
Title: Reflection 17 Jul 2014 10:43 pm
Reviewer: Sabrina (Signed) [Report This]
    This is brilliant! Love it!
Title: Reflection 05 Oct 2013 11:19 am
Reviewer: JAWorley (Signed) [Report This]
    Wow, a very powerful story, and I think putting it in this tense, saying 'you' rather than 'he' makes the reader feel more of what Harry is feeling. You've done a wonderful job and you have a way with words. Not that I approve of cutting, but I'm just saying that you really put people in Harry's shoes here.
Title: Reflection 29 Jan 2013 9:50 pm
Reviewer: Wandacarla (Signed) [Report This]
    Poor Harry but great ending! I'd read a sequel *hint hint* (;
Title: Reflection 24 Jan 2013 2:55 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Very well written thank you
Title: Reflection 22 Jan 2013 7:25 am
Reviewer: Dream Painter (Signed) [Report This]
    This was beautifully done, Lillielle! You handled the second person marvelously well - it can be a bit tricky, sometimes. I love how you have Snape just silently treat Harry's wounds. I found it rather in-character, especially from someone who can truly understand.

    Wonderfully done all around. Thanks for answering the challenge.

    Author's Response: Oh, thank you so much. :3 I saw your challenge and I just had to write -something- for it. Second person is so tricky to pull off, I had like three false starts before I hit on this plot line and went...yep, this is it. And yeah...I thought about having Severus talk about it, but then it was like...nah. :p
Title: Reflection 21 Jan 2013 11:51 pm
Reviewer: kspence (Signed) [Report This]
    That was really good, you need to write more.

    Author's Response: Thank you!
Title: Reflection 21 Jan 2013 9:16 pm
Reviewer: skywriter123 (Signed) [Report This]
    Brilliant, very realistic. Exactly what would run through your head, given Harry's circumstances. Cutting is serious though, maybe add a warning that it might trigger something? Cause it got me feeling... odd again... But the fear of being caught and the shame, that's spot on.

    Author's Response: ...Oooh, that's a good idea, I hadn't thought of a trigger warning really, I'm sorry! I hope you're all right. I'm glad you liked it, though.

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